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Review:putitonpaper says:
Are we sure the slap was accidental?

OMG MY GOD! OH MY GOD!! What are you doing to me?? Did she kiss him in the original? And if so, how did I not remember this? OH MY GOD!!

“'You don't still love him, do you?' Flora asked all of a sudden, ignoring my last comment. 'Because if you do, you can tell me. I'll understand.’” What. Is. Happening.

“'Sometimes it doesn't feel like it. He doesn't treat me very well. I barely even see him. I've never had a boyfriend before, but still. I don't think it's supposed to be like this …’”. Ugh. James is awful in relationships apparently.

“'What was she even thinking? She knows you know that he … cheated.' She cleared her throat uncomfortably, suddenly avoiding my eye. 'Like, how brazen of her.’” - Oh dear, Dom.

“'No, I actually don't want to hear it.' I threw my hands out, palms facing her, backing away. Her face was pale. 'I don't know why you had to tell him anything. I don't know why you think that's your place at all. I sometimes—I just don't get it. Why do you have to stick your nose in every thing.’” - This is SO ironic.

I couldn’t even record my reactions during the fight scene. It was just too good! And I was just too zoned in to take any notes! Well done. Well done.

“'Yes,' Dom interrupted hotly, vehemently. Her eyes blazed with an identifiable emotion. 'We've—we've got to figure this out! He thinks you've done something that you obviously haven't and it's not—it's not fair. Jenny, it just isn't fair that he can treat you like this, break upwith you, for something you didn't do.’” OH DEAR DOM! The irony of her statements - it’s tough to take sometimes lol.

! - it’s so great reading this again! I can’t even tell what you added and what was there before. I just remember reeling and thinking James just HAD to be lying because Dom was FAM to Jenny, obviously. Ah - testament to your writing skills that I went back and read the argument again just so I caught everything.

And one more thing - MY GOD, POOR FLORA!!

Author's Response: Oh we'll never know . loool.

AH no she didn't!!! This party was so TAME in the original and I was like *rolling up sleeves* time to destroy lives LOL. So all new stuff haha.

James really is ...

More irony!!! Love it - can't help it hahaha.

THANK YOU! I honestly was the same writing it - I went over it a million times and read every word and god that was the first time I was genuinely like - sh*t am I writer? Because I was like okay, I'm James now, is what Jenny says confusing? What would I say in response? And then switch to Jenny and be like why is James reacting like this, etc. - and god it was hard lol. SO thank you a billion times.

AHAHAHAH dom was fam - crying LOL. And oh yeah ... poor Flora hahaha.

Thanks for this lovely review you angel!! P xxx

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