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Review:insertcreativeusername says:
Wow, I love all the characters you've created! They're hilarious and their friendship is so humorous and I dunno..real? I suppose I really loved this because the girls are literally my friends (Is it weird if I'm the Ray of the group?).

I loved your OC's thoughts/personality. Great duel between her and Albus, btw. Really captivating, and merlin, her cheeky comment at the end? Comedy GOLD!

I'm a fan of your other story Hopeless Manifestations, and that's how I came across this one, and man I'm glad I did! Love it, I hope you'll complete it soon!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, this review means a lot and they really make me smile, sorry it's taken a few days to reply! I'm so glad you love the characters, I kinda wanted to shove a load of completely different characters together and like play with that dynamic as I thought it would be a lot more fun than a bunch of people who get on perfectly and are really similar. I knew from the start I wanted to have a main character (which in this case is clary) but I didn't want all the others to be there purely to support her storyline, I wanted them to have storylines and loud personalities too.
Ahahah I'm glad you like the humour and that comment at the end, she's not a one for sitting back and letting people humiliate her, if they do that she'll do it back ten times worse.
It really makes me happy know that you liked HM enough to come over and read another of my stories and love that too so thank you! HM was always a more serious darker fic so I wanted to let out all my humour and lighthearted ideas in another fic and hence this was born.
Also I don't know if you noticed that I had another fic out about rose and scorpius, prewarning: I really wouldn't bother with that one. It's abandoned for a start, its badly written the characters are bland and it just wasn't great so I'm dissecting it a little and using it to create some of the scenes for this because I didn't like the fic as a wholebut I kinda liked some scenes/lines.
Don't worry I haven't given up on them, I'm about halfway through the next chapter of both this and HM and I'm also working on the prologue for a new fic which I think is going to be my big main story that I write, I've spent about six months character profiling, world building and just writing the prologue and I never normally plan all that much before I write so that's something. Although I love writing hopeless manifestations and social disposition and don't want to give up on them, I feel like they're kind of practise for this new story so I hope when I finally get it out it doesn't disappoint ahah.
Anyways this review has given me quite a bit of motivation and since I'm on a two hour train journey right now I think I'll get some writing done now :)

~ Charlie ~

PS. I saw that you've left another review (thank you so much ahah) and I'll get a little more writing done then I'll reply to that too :)

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