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Review:DougA says:
You need to work on quotation marks, as what a character says tends to get lost in what the character is doing, and leads to a confusing read.
Still decent work.

Still no medical attention for Harry or Ginny ? They just finished the last battle of a war. I can't believe that neither was injured, especially Harry. And Ginny gets over never forgining Harry awfully quickly. I can understand you not having Dobby die (it is, afterall, your story), but where was he last chapter ? And If he shows up now, on his own, where is Kreacher ?

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