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Review:Glisten says:
"Expect the unexpectable, okay?" it makes sense now! That would be one, big, jaw -dropping surprise to have the Headmisstress of her new boarding school in the middle of nowhere to suddenly announce her mother to the entire school. Whew! I would probably faint if that were to happen.

The way you described Rose weirded me out (in a good way) because you didn't really describe he colour of her skin but the fact that you said any other tone besides the one it was would make it clash with her hair gave me a clear image of what her skin tone is. Interesting.

James has been talking about her! I bet he was totally downplaying how interested he was in her when they met on the train again. I'm sure he knew exactly what her name was even though he totally pretended not to! Aghh that's so cute and I'm pretty sure that Nic may have caught on too when Dom said he hadn't stopped talking about her!

Speaking of Dom, I really like her! Straightforwardness, in my opinion, is a really admirable trait in a person. While most people want to go through the formalities and waste time Dom seems like one of the kinds of people who have the ability to skip over that and not sugarcoat everything. Oh, and also I love how she was able to answer Nic's question about Hagrid before she even finished it! Very funny. Nic and Dom already seem to have a level of communication that many friendships takes years to develop. Like when they were saying how they could see how the carriages were pulled. I feel like they'll have a good, strong friendship.

I like how you added the detail of students being referred to by the numbers of their education level in the States (instead of "Sixth years" having it be "Sixes"). It's from her perspective so until she gets used to Hogwarts it makes sense that it would be written using American wizarding words. Or maybe that's what everyone started calling them sometime in the last two decades or so. Then again, Hagrid DID address the new students as first years but that could be because he's just been doing that forever.

Also the added detail about the name of the wing the prefect meeting room was in was nice to. Good no know Collin hasn't been forgotten by everyone yet.

I'm interested to know what it's going to be like at Hogwarts with her mum there! Also is it possible that a I can have both a high five and a hug? Haha, good chapter like usual! Oh yeah, and your new banner is lovely by the way. The Nic in the picture is so pretty, no wonder James couldn't stop talking about her!

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review, of course you get both a high five AND a hug! i'm so glad you caught those little things (AGAIN ;) ) about American wizarding words since i wanted to make some differences in what i would think would be birtish vs. american terminology.

rose and dom are characters that have been so widely written about, so it was kind of hard to decide which way i wanted to go with them. we'll see what james' personality will be like throughout this story! :)

and thank you! prokaryote. @ the dark arts was so kind to pick up my request, i had requested one right after you or someone had mentioned it in a past review, but it was getting no love

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