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Review:deepdesire23 says:
Thank you for another great chapter! I will always be rooting for Eva, so I'm definitely biased when I say I'm not a big fan of Castillo right now! However her point of view on Eva is a fair one, and I'm intrigued to see if she will eventually go through an internal struggle on what she perceives as right and wrong in regards to Eva. Poor Lily, being stuck in the middle of it. Maybe she can try and stay neutral for now but if she and Castillo grow closer and Castillo continues her vendetta being neutral will become increasingly difficult. I guess I will just have to wait and see hmm!
And just everything about Eva and Scorpius' feelings about Thane and Thane's people... nothing is ever just black and white and thats why I love your stories so much. The characters are so complex with very real flaws and yet after following them for so long.. they are just so enduring. Poor Doyle, getting into more trouble!
Looking forward to another one!


Author's Response: Obviously I ultimately root for Eva, but I also obviously don't like to make life easy for my characters. One thing I was aware of in all the consideration of redemption in Oblivion is that there was nobody wronged by Eva pre-trilogy getting to state their piece. Which, well, is a little convenient for Eva. She was only not at Hogwarts during Phlegethon because 1: Eva didn't actually exist until the very last second of writing Starfall, its Chapter 2 was originally Chapter 1 then I invented her and she got the first scene, and 2: She needed to be able to infiltrate the gang. So we KNOW Eva has done awful stuff, but it's never really been front and centre. We'll see how it pans out. Thanks for reviewing!

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