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Review:Emma says:
I always like a Snape/OC story! I found in some Snape/OC stories that another Marauder girl is a bit over done to start a relationship with Snape. It didn't work with Lily, even though Snape and Lily shared some common interest with potions. I enjoyed the beginning chapters with your descriptions of the interaction between Snape/Leonor. I'm glad to read a story where the girl is not a saint nor has special abilities.
Leonor seems rather normal, like Snape, a little talented, but mostly studious, hard-working and responsible. In my opinion she's attractive to Snape, because not immediately absorbed by Gryffindor and still Leonor is not callous nor snide as the Malfoy's.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for writing a review! I'll try to make Leonor not equal to Lily or any of the Marauders, hope she gets step by step an own personality which should be in the grey area between the Hogwarts house stereotypes. Looking forward to your next review!

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