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Review:Glisten says:
Wow! I can't believe she's pregnant! These are so many things that could happen now, though... she could die right before she has it or she could have it and then die or maybe she's just mistaken?

It's just so tragic that she's going to have a baby now, leaving a child motherless is just the worst. I wonder if Rose will work harder to do the research on her condition and even more I wonder if she will avail.

I like how you added details about how her and Draco came to be and how she saw a resemblance in her son's relationship with Rose. In case she does die, I'm glad that she got that moment of happiness knowing Scorpius had found his love. It's a gift that Scorpius didn't know he was giving her.

I'm absolutely glued to your story and I see it's been awhile since you updated. It's funny because I didn't even notice this story was being advertised, it just popped up in an advanced search, but I saw the banner when I clicked on this chapter! Just that that was kind of funny, haha. I'm surprised his doesn't have more attention. I mean, I guess this kind of story requires a very special taste and appreciation. I feel like it definitely deserves more readers, though.

I'm hoping that you've been working on your next chapter so that you can post an update soon! I'll be waiting (eagerly) for the fourth part!

Author's Response: The pregnancy was a decision I made later in my planning for this story, but I wanted it (mostly) for Draco's arc in this story. There still hasn't been much said about him and how he's dealing with Astoria's condition, and with a baby on the way things will be somewhat prompted into action, and not in the way some of you might think. I have, aside from the general plot of the story, several subplots that'll be explored and I haven't introduced even half of them. Quite a few members of the Weasley-Potter clan will be important to the story and all the subplots will be connected and relevant to the main plot ^^

I have a little surprise on Draco/Astoria's and Scorpius/Rose's past for you guys, by the way :3

Lastly I'd like to apologize for how long it's been taking me to update. However I'm a college student and just finished my exams today. I've been itching to go back to writing (I write for another fandom as well and have several works in progress at the moment) so now I finally can have at it. I'll be updating in the next few days ^^

Once more, thank you so much for your comments. I only saw them today and they truly were a gift after the semester I've had lol looking forward to hear from you after the next chapter :)

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