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Review:BBHP says:
*raising my hand* Me! I like good ol' romantic angst! And you write it so perfectly! It's exciting and interesting and a little uncomfortable and it's just so good.

Long chapters, definitely! I want to soak up as much of this story that I can.

Everything that's happening is just so crazy. I'm glad Issy told Lily about everything. That'd just a lot to keep to one's self. And I liked how Lily responded.

Ginny acted just as a mother would in this chapter. I think mothers have a sort of sixth sense in these situations, and Ginny definitely knows something is up. I wouldn't be surprised if she confronts Issy again, and is more direct next time.

The tension between James/Issy/Al is so good. I don't know if James really likes Issy, or if he's just trying to prove something to Al. I do, however, think Al has real feelings for Issy, and it just breaks my heart!

It was pretty fun that there was a bit of Louis in this chapter.

Keep the good stuff coming!

Author's Response: Thank you! Uncomfortable is kind of what I'm going for so I'm glad you got that!
Woo- next one should be a long one too and I have a couple of huge ones planned soon! I hope you'll enjoy those!
As for Lily, I thought it was probably time that Issy told someone and I tried to establish the growing bond between them so hopefully that worked!
Hmmm, I won't say too much on Ginny, but there will definitely be more of her within a couple of chapters!
James/Issy/Al is literally my favourite, even though I hate love triangles most of the time and I never thought I would actually write one. Next chapter is probably the big head-to-head for those three, so I can't wait to see what you think!
I love Louis, and honestly I hadn't planned to put him into this chapter but he comes back later, so I thought I should introduce him!
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a great review!!
Alice xxx

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