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Review:sushmita says:
Scheming and more scheming, looking forward to the next chapter. I also find it odd that Dumbledore is thinking about Malfoy's missing wand.
Grammatically, I think I'd like to see your sentences a lil more crisper and shorter if possible.
Typos " like have never had
is going difficult
idea than he was"

Author's Response: Actually, He was more interested in what Tom was up to and what part Molly was going to have in the situation. I don't recall him actually thinking about the wand, just the intensity that Tom had when he was looking at the girl.

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