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Review:Sushmita says:
Nice plot!
Typos "He does he have
all that you
which one that he would"
"after meeting with Professor Dippet" - I think u meant the other prof

I'm surprised Tom Riddle is in his dorm as he was supposed to be in isolation as well from his punishment before the hols, or u could just remove references of it entirely from the previous chapter as well.
I'm surprised the students at such a young age know how to obliviate or even control other students' actions. I wonder if its based on a time where the rules of the ministry of magic were not as strong on what can/cannot be done, or maybe the restricted books in library were not as restrictive?

Author's Response: Thanks again for the heads up and suggestions. I will be going over this chapter again as it get to it (printers are wonderful, I can go back with your comments to see what you spotted) ;)

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