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Review:adluvshp says:
Again jumping in the middle coz CTF.

Ooh, Hannah and Susan! They both look adorable together and I could visualise the entire scene in my head - the dance floor, the music, the two girls dancing together and having fun. I love how the characterisations come out through the most subtle of things, like the way Hannah is dependent on Susan in a way, and how Susan seems to be the one who is more "out there". Hannah beginning to feel comfortable in her own skin and feeling so much in love was all very sweet too and brought a smile to my face. Hannah's emotions come through really beautifully in the narrative such as when you say: The world feels so alive, and every face around me seems to glow with beautiful possibility.

It gives me the impression that she is enjoying herself like this after quite a while and slowly learning to simply "be". That expression is lovely. It is interesting how much she loves Susan that does not even feel bothered by the fact that her lover is flirting with someone else. It shows me her security and also how smitten she is - she finds that cute too, and that is very sweet. It speaks of a very healthy relationship! I would love to go back and read the previous chapters to see how it developed and got to the current stage.

And Neville enters! I wonder what role he has to play in the story and how would the events unfold next. The way you introduced his presence in the story was totally dramatic and awesome. Of course he is cute, haha.

Great one!

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