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Review:melian says:
Lesley Gore! I love Lesley Gore. That probably says something about my age, though, especially given the challenge title. Sigh.

Anyway, Sam, this is gorgeous. Youíve taken the memories of schooldays and melded them with very adult feelings and emotions that can arise when you meet someone from your past out of the blue like that. What was an innocent friendship can so often turn into something more just by the passage of a few years, and youíve shown that admirably.

I particularly liked the almost innate sense of disappointment when Susan leads Hannah to a table in the Leaky Cauldron rather than a room upstairs. Their touch and subsequent eye contact had almost been a promise that would at first be unfulfilled. And then you leave it so open! What happens after they clasp hands? Do they sit and talk for a bit, or do they do some minor exploration and then kiss, or do the rooms that Hannah looked at so wistfully come into play? Any and all are possible and I think itís the anticipation that works so well here. Touch begins their story, touch ends it Ė in this chapter at least Ė but it has been so much more than just touch. Itís been, like I said, a promise.

So, youíve got me hooked right from the get-go here. Lovely piece of work. Really enjoyed reading it. :D

Cheers Mel

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