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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
As I open the door to our flat, my smile bursts into a jubilant laugh as I bound forward.

It has been way too long! UH, this story. Your writing. This line. This story just makes me happy. Every sentence you write is like a little story in itself. I get lost in each and every sentence because everything flows beautifully.

I swell with warmth as he greets me with joyous laughter, which resonates through both of our chests as we embrace.

Like this right here just makes me happy. I swelled a little bit. This story is yellow. It's just pure yellow. It's sunshine.

“Always!” I kiss him back with an enthusiastic giggle.

Reminds me of the beginning of a relationship when you're so enamored with the person. You're so in love and everything they do and say is exciting.

And this will all be followed up with an unrivaled desert of the finest canned peaches.”

Aw, I love their love. I love how playful they are and also ERNIE. No one ever writes Ernie. Even I don't write Ernie and I love Ernie. I love Ernie and Justin. You should write an Ernie/Justin story, just putting that out there. I just love how playful and carefree he is.

“Me neither.” I am pleased to have a reason to talk about her, to shape my lips around the name that lingers in my mind.

And now I don't so much love their love because Susan is endgame. Sorry Ernie, I feel for you.

UH! The heat radiating off of them is practically contagious. I might have to kiss the next guy I see (if only). They seem like a fun couple. Like they really are in love or at least in lust with each other, which is perfectly fine. Why would he be suspicious of anything? Nothing has happened, you know? That's what makes it 1000x hotter. Nothing has happened...yet. Poor Ernie, I feel for you mate. What gets me is that the chapters are so short but in just a few words you're able to create this clear picture of who they all are and what's at stake.

UH! Must read next chapter once CTF is over.

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