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Review:water_lilies says:
This is such a great story!

I thought it had been abandoned, since you didn't update for a few months when I was checking daily for updates, but I am sooo happy you finished it!!! It was a great surprise to look it up yesterday to find it complete!!! I was so happy that I made a point to read the entire story today from Chapter 1 :D

I love how well you mixed the Harry Potter with Pride and Prejudice universes, they are both two of my absolute favorite books and you did them justice; you wove the characters, places, and personalities from both into the P&P plot in an amazing way. The changes that you made (such as Peter and Voldemort) fir very well with the story too. I loved the direct quotes and references to Pride and Prejudice and the fact that James and Lily's relationship, as well as their personalities, retained a lot of the characteristics that we know from the Harry Potter books.

The pace of the story and the character development was great and it really made the story enjoyable. There were some spelling errors (such as whether for weather in one chapter) and some changes from the third to either second of first person, specifically when it came to Marlene, but I forgot to point them out in the corresponding chapters... sorry about that! Nevertheless, they did not take away from the great story you created.

This is truly one of my favorite James/Lily stories and my favorite AU :D

Loved the story, please keep writing!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so, so much for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful review.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it -- p&p and hp are two of my favorite universes as well, and I'm glad that I didn't butcher them too terribly when trying to combine them!

I am chronically guilty of popping in and out of this site sporadically, so I do apologize for that! I'm glad that you guys were willing to bear with me and to stick through with it until the end. It truly means a lot. :'D

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