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Review:Art says:
Hello again and a very Merry Christmas to you!This chapter seemed to be sort of a filler,a sort of lull between storms ,if you will.It's nice to see that you have not been lost in your action portrayal and varying the pace of the story,keeping it interesting in the process. I've always loved the way you show adult Harry's mind weighing between responsibility,duty and his moral dilemma,and his use of the Unforgivable against Morgana Bowtown adds a nice dark touch to the chapter;this grants an alternate horrifying perspective to the war which I RELISH. The best part about your writing is you're being a realist and have complete creative control over the subtleties of that fine line separating fiction and life.
I've got only a oh-so-negligible complaint regarding this chapter.It's a little less involved than expected from the aftermath of a gory battle and seems to be a tad hurriedly penned.But of course,you;re the author and I KNOW FOR A FACT from your earlier works that my confidence on you has never been unfounded and I am counting on you,friend,to show your usual mastery in dishing out a mouthwatering spectacle.However, you must admit that you committed a thoroughly dishonourable ,if I might say so,crime by leaving me as a reader on the brink,for nearly 2 months.I didn't like that,especially for such a nice piece of writing as yours...:D
Thank you.It's being a pleasure to read your work and here's looking forward to the next chapter(For Harry's sake,update fast ! XDXDXD).
Thank you and a very HAPPY NEW YEAR !(Is there a cat in hell's chance of seeing you earlier ?)

Author's Response: Hey there, thank you SO much for your review.

Yes, part of the reason why it feels rushed is because within the majority of the chapter (the end of the battle) a lot happens within a very short time frame and dragging things out made it feel very unnatural when I was writing out drafts. As for being more involved, that was really the job of the previous chapter and feels more that way (I believed) when they were read together (and not, I'll admit 1 or 2 months apart). Most of the detailing was already done and making this chapter just as dark/gritty after an 8000 word battle would make for quite heavy reading (especially as this chapter is telling the turnaround for our heroes).

I'm hoping to get more chapters done before I start a big job in Jan so my aim is to get the next chapter by the beginning of Feb latest.

Thank you again so so much for your review and please keep them coming!
Hope you had a great Christmas and have a great New Year,
SiriusAura92 :D

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