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Review:Lovethismuch says:
This story is very nicely written, I can see the stories where your idea comes from and I'm truly in love because you don't do grammar mistakes. But for me Ronald Wesley's behavior have been weird to understand especially the parts where he is violent I always end up thinking how stupid it would look like if someone walks by and hits someone the way you write it. So detailed and longer chapters to those if you add them anymore. Also you repeat, and repeat towards the end how bad the relationship with Harry is. We readers already know it's bad so when you add Harry try to bring it in another perspective. Harry's point of view would be magnificent. And then my suggestion for next chapter. Put something even worse happen to Hermione maybe the evil teacher tries to kill her and then Draco is there to save her and magic happens. They would be in love. And then we could enjoy the full power of your writing about an amazing sex.

Author's Response: This came from an aspect that Ron always had the potential to be a complete jerk... but after the war, in this story he's coming from a place of PTSD and that can make someone change immensely (even become someone who they may never have been)

Thanks for your insight though


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