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Review:Felpata Lupin says:
HPFT Team Werewolf Review.

Hello! Back here to see how this wonderful story is going!

Oh, my... poor Teddy... this was so hard to read, so heart-wrenching... I wonder how Harry managed to sustain the sight... I wanted to burst into the room and stop it all... but I'm glad they managed to break Pansy in the end, at least. Even if I felt slightly sorry for her, too. Parental love always moves me, as wicked as mother and son might be.

I loved all the emotions in this chapter. Your characterization of everyone was perfect, especially James' hatred, that came across so powerfully. But as you might've already guessed, my favourite here was Teddy. Agreeing to the plan and sustaining all that pain was so incredibly brave of him. It's so clear he loves Dom deeply.

The only CC I can give is that there were a few typos here and there, like in this sentence:
"He doubted he could successfully convince Pansy Namken that she was his son." Guess you meant "he was her son."
Otherwise, everything else was perfect.

I'll run off to the next chapter now!

Much love,

Author's Response: Hi, Chiara!! Thank you so much for your review. This is great feedback! Yup, I probably ran through this chapter way too fast. I'll touch it up when I can. :) Thank you again for your feedback! It's so helpful! I hope to see you back for more. :)

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