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Review:water_lilies says:
Thank you for updating! I've been waiting for this a while now!

After quickly rereading the previous chapter (I had forgotten what had happened), I have to say that Ryder and Zoe's relationship was something I expected - something I think Carina knew too, or at least suspected, but was too shocked to think clearly about it when she found them.

I knew something had to go wrong for Carina and James, but I always thought it was going to be Midnight the one that came in between them; I never expected that it would be Lily the one that, unintentionally, caused the rift between them. I am looking forward to how their relationship will get fixed, since it's pretty obvious that they actually care about each other.

There are quite a few couples between Potter/Weasley kids and members of the Sacred Twenty-Eight Club, I wonder how their parents will react to all of them. Also, how are they (all the kids) going to deal with all the arranged marriages and the expectations that have been put on all their shoulders? That'll be very interesting to see.

I have to say that the lines "Merlin, could you be anymore Ravenclaw." and "Could you be anymore annoying," with the emphasis on the "be" were read in Chandler Bing's voice, which made them funnier than they were probably meant to be (unless you were going for a Friends reference, or something like that).

Great chapter, please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!

I definitely didn't try and make Ryder and Zoe a surprise, and it was right under Carina's nose, but she wasn't paying as much attention as usual, for obvious reasons.

Of course I couldn't just let James and Carina be happy. Something had to go wrong! I had always planned for Lily and Levi to indirectly cause their break up, but I wanted it to catch readers off guard, so I didn't hint to it. Midnight will come into play later, though...

And yes anything that sounds like a Chandler Bing reference probably is! He is my fave friends character!

Sorry about the delay in reply but the next chapter should be out soon!!


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