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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Slytherin Pukwudgie,
Except for the end, this was a concise beginning to what can be a wonderful tale. I enjoyed (if at this point that can be said), you included all the important characters. So I applaud you. Now for the part you may or may not like. I found you didn't space between the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. Yes you had a period, but there wasn't the usual separation. You also had a few misspelled words and capitalization was also missing. You might want to look for a Beta reader to look over your next chapter before you post. Your story has great potential, with a few tweaks you just might find a smoother flow. I look forward to your next.
FoM
PS I can't wait to find just which Death Eater snuck into the Great Hall.

Author's Response: I thank you for the review and i am sorry for the mistakes.I will correct them.This isn't my first language and i was a little bit in a hurry when i posted it,but,no problem,the mistakes will disapear.

Slytherin Pukwudgie


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