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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hi there!

Back for another review.

I enjoyed the amount of attention you spent characterizing each of the Weasleys. I now have a really clear picture of who you imagine each of them to be. Or I suppose it's more about how Hugo views each of them.

I was a little bit surprised about how annoyed/ bitter Hugo seems to be. I get the angsty teenager deal, but he actually seems to not like any of his cousins at all. I'll be curious to see how that develops over the course of the story. Maybe vacation will soften him up a little bit.

Now that the story is finally taking place in Holland, I'm curious to see what sort of cultural information you'll include in the story. I liked the bit about the pronunciation of the airport being difficult for foreigners. It's little details like that that really give you the full picture of a country.

My only little bit of cc is that this chapter seemed to be mostly a filler chapter. It sort of serves to transition all of the characters from one place to another, but nothing much really happens in it.

I'll be curious to see how this adventure develops! Good job!

~Kaitlin

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