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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hello again!

Back for another chapter!

I already knew that they were going to Amsterdam on vacation because I've seen you mention it on the forums, but it was very interesting to see everyone's reaction.

Honestly, I really got the distinct impression that they were all quite spoiled. I mean, here Arthur went through all of this effort to take everyone on a holiday and everyone's acting like he's done something awful. Just completely ungrateful.

I had a good giggle with the girls leaving their diaries behind. With the amount of people going on this vacation, I imagine there will be lots of lost things and problems.

I do have to say that Hugo seems a little bit bitter in this. I think that's good since he's a teenager and they usually are super sarcastic and obnoxious.

I do usually try to leave a little bit of CC in my reviews, so here it goes...

I noticed that you tend to slip from past tense to present tense in the middle of paragraphs. Just be careful about that because it can get confusing.

All in all, another good chapter! I can't wait for the actual vacation to start.

~Kaitlin

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