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Review:TreacleTart says:
Hey Alec,

I'm finally here to review your story for my Anywhere But There challenge. Sorry it took so long for me to get to it, but NANO kept me busy all of last month.

Since there are so many chapters to review with this story, I will leave shorter reviews on chapters 1 through 13 and then a much longer more detailed one on chapter 14 explaining how I'm judging your entry in my challenge. You'll also have to forgive me as it may take me a few days to review all of the chapters.

This was a nice start to your story. At first, I was a bit confused about who the main character was, but as I read more it became clearer. I was actually really excited to see that it was Hugo, mainly because he hardly ever gets written as a main character.

As soon as you mentioned all of the Weasleys, Scamanders, Longbottoms, and Scorpius all going on vacation together, I knew there was going to be trouble and chaos. Then adding in the stipulation that they'd be traveling muggle style. Wow. Well, let's just say I can already imagine the chaos that's going to ensue.

Good start! I'll be back for more soon.

~Kaitlin

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