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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

It's Gabbie again. I am here with the end of our three-part review! We should start this up gain but I noticed that my story is a bit longer than yours so if you want me to check out some other stuff on your AP, just let me know when this is finished. :D

I actually liked the way you started this chapter, I didn't really get what was going on at first but starting something from a dog's POV is both daunting and pretty darn unique. I thought at first that this person was an Animagus and that they were waiting for our villain but it turned out that he was merely abandoned and sad. That was heartbreaking to read and I didn't expect his rescuer to be Ron either! I was wondering where he went to be honest and I think that I really enjoyed his account of why he and Hermione split. Now, I think that those flashbacks that you included were good and everything but I think that Hermione's character just doesn't seem like herself, even the way she talks just seems way out of personality range for me. I'm not really sure that I like it either but from Ron's POV I was actually pretty pissed off. I mean, I think that he was justified in being angry with her but Hermione just kind of made it worse by by being so nasty towards him. I'm not sure how couples fight since I'm forever alone but I thought it was a bit much and I think that she had a lot of nerve inviting Krum over to their house, knowing how he felt. And then she cheats with him on with Malfoy? Huh? What? I wasn't a fan of that and for once, I was siding with Ron and while I think that he got some pretty darn good advice, it's going to take more than him shaping up to fix their relationship. I hope you go into more detail about that later but until then, thanks for the swap! I shall see you again!

Much love,

Gabbie

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