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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm back! I decided to stop by again and keep on rolling with our review. I was really curious about what was going to happen after the last chapter and this certainly didn't disappoint. I'm kind of blown away by how much of a turn this story has taken and I'm going to try and take it all in!

I was pretty worried about Hugo and I'm glad that we found out what happened to him. I expected him to wake up alone and scared but thank God he wasn't, though I certainly didn't think Slughorn would be there. I honestly didn't know what the heck was going on and I thought that Hugo had the perfect reaction to everything, though I'm not sure if I would have been able to take everything in quite that well. I think that your information was really detailed and I'm very curious about where the story is going to go now, though I do think that you should put a few spaces between your dialogue. It makes the characters seem like they're talking in one giant paragraph and it would be easier to read if there were spaces in between them. Now, I'm not sure if Slughorn should have gave Hugo every single detail of what was going on since he is just a kid but what a horrible history! Rudolphus sounds terrible and I like this little twist you gave with him, I certainly didn't think that he was still alive. And collecting new, dangerous magic?! What is he going to do with that time turner, I wonder? Hm.that doesn't bode well for any of us.

And where the funk is Ron?! Why wouldn't he be there to see his son? Why would Hermione not even tell him? What?! She's easily becoming my least favorite character here so I'm going to hop on over the next chapter extra quick. Hmph.

Thanks for the read!

Much love,

Gabbie

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