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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

This is Gabbie from the forums here with your review and the beginning of our three-part swap. I'm sorry that I'm so late on this, real life got in the way and I wasn't able to get to this sooner. It was such a pain!

Wow, this story is taking a dark turn! Well, the previous chapters had their elements of being pretty dark anyway but this was really grim! I didn't expect this to happen either so I'm really curious to find out what the heck is going on. I thought the beginning of this was cleverly written because we're back to the girls swooning over boys and all of those normal things. I thought that Rose and Dom's dynamic was pretty interesting, I didn't really expect them to get along much but I really liked what you did here with them. Rose should stop poking people in the eye though, that could be dangerous. Hahaha. I am thankful though that she got a chance to spend time with Scorpy but on the other, I wish that they hadn't been left alone either. I mean, flaming death comes for them later and it would have been great if they had had some help!

Now, Harry's POV for one thing is really insightful and I am beginning to piece together what happened between Hermione and Ron. I'm kind of annoyed that Hermione just didn't tell Ron the truth and there were a few moments when I thought she was a little out of character. Can Ron really be that immature? I think that he wouldn't have been so angry if she had just told the truth so I think that I'm going to just keep reading and figure out if that's going to be discussed in more detail.

Anyway, I was really worried about Rose and Scorpius! That was scary and completely out of nowhere, which I really liked. I wasn't expecting it and for a moment I thought that something horrible was going to happen but instead, the end of this chapter hints at worse things to come. Rudolphos Lestrange? Where the heck did he come from? Why after all this time? Hm...

I shall see you in the next chapter!

Much love,

Gabbie

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