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Review:MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 says:
Tasha here again for the reviews you requested.


I have to agree with the Weasley clan of all the places Arthur could have picked to go on vacation he chose Amsterdam?!?!?!?

I liked Molly's head smacks and George's reaction to having to leave the shop for a week. I also liked how you're connecting events from the books into your story with the diary and I'm curious to find out if that is an important detail to remember for future chapters. Also was it intentional to have Lucy forget her diary and then have Molly forget one too?

Again I noticed some typos and word choice errors and suggest getting a beta if you haven't already done so.

Overall I'm enjoying your concept and look forward to seeing what happens when the clan lands in Amsterdam.

Peace, Love, and Tacos

Tasha

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