Our website is made possible by displaying online advertisements to our visitors.
Please consider supporting us by disabling your ad blocker.





Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

This is Gabbie back for the second part of our three-chapter review swap! Thank you so much for agreeing to do this with me too, it means a lot to this old lady. :D

So, it seems like there are quite a few little things happening in this chapter.I like that we're bouncing back and forth with the POVs in this story, it helps to make the entire night more cohesive. It's one of those funny moments when you think that you're the only person going through something before realizing that the whole world is bigger than you. It's strange, but everyone is going through very different experiences at the club and I'm really curious to know more about how the night concludes. Not only did Louis nearly confess his love for Lorriete (I can't understand if she likes him back or not), Hugo got in the way and revealed that he liked her too. I thought that little section was pretty amusing, Hugo would deny it to the ends of the earth that he was in love with her but Louis saw through him easily. I do wonder which one of them will have to courage to confess and who will win in the end though. Hm...

Poor Molly! You know, she wasn't my favorite character in this story by a long shot but I really feel bad for her. I also think that her cousins kind of overlook her and I would really like to know why. I wonder if this is just some off shoot of them not really liking Percy? It's pretty unfair. I felt bad that Molly hated being in Hufflepuff though (I'm in that House and it's awesome!) and I wonder why she thinks so badly of herself. It's pretty sad that, added on to it, no one even believed that she had been attacked! Victoire and Lily may be used to her seeking attention but I wish that they would ask her why she acts that way. Also, what the heck prompted the Dementor attack? Where did it go? Why was it there? So many questions!

And Harry! He passed up an opportunity to get all adult with Ginny! Gasp! What on earth is he going to do about Ron and Hermione? I like that that was his main concern though, it really showed how much he cared about his two best friends but I doubt that he'll be able to fix this.

Onward to the next chapter!

Much love,

Gabbie

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 632
Submit Report: