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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

This is Gabbie from the forums dropping by for our three-chapter swap! I would have started this yesterday but I was reading Attack on Titan and it kind of scarred me for life.

Anyhoo!

The adventures continue! I'm not sure whether this chapter was supposed to be mostly humor or not but I was rolling. Hugo's observations are always pure gold and I thought it was kind of amusing to see him being so awkward in such a posh setting. There's something weird about this club though and I'm not sure if that's going to come up again later on but what was up with all these identical people? First Snape's long lost relative and later on, that Teddy look-alike! I wonder if there are clues thrown in about that or if it's just something weird you wanted to include. I would like to know more about the Snape guy though, I feel like that might have some potential to be really interesting for the story. I'm sure that Harry would like to know more about him but I'm not sure if that's going to come up again. Hugo of course was so worried about being snogged or something that he almost got molested by another guy! I think I died laughing on that part, "I'll give you candy!" is going to stay with me for a while. I like the exaggerations that you make for them as well, each little thing is amplified to comical effect and I really enjoy it. I do wonder though what's going to happen to them all, I have a feeling that this clubbing escapade isn't going to end well. Dom almost gets her hopes up on this guy that looks like Teddy for one thing, I'm glad that she realized that she couldn't PRETEND to lavish her affections on a guy just because he was similar to someone she had a crush on. I am glad though that she wasn't impressed by him or his attitude and really happy that she tossed that phone in his face. Hahaha. Good girl!

Now, the last bits of this have me so worried! What on earth is going on? Lily and Molly are having a row (Filled with so many swears) and next thing you know, they're being attacked by something! What?! I have to know more so I'll be hopping on over to the next chapter now!

Much love,

Gabbie

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