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Review:veila says:
I waited until now to write a review, because I always like to read a couple of chapters before forming an opinion. But here are a few things I got so far:

-First off, I LOVE the fact, that the main character is a Hufflepuff and a bada* at that. Hufflepuffs get waay too little attention and are often degraded to some dumb retards.
Which brings me to my next point:

-'The house qualities merge a lot more than youd think, Im brave cause I want to protect my friends. Weird right.'
She is sooo right with that statement and I am so happy that you mentioned it. It's a concept which, in my opinion, gets overlooked too easily. You'd think the idea of labeling someone for just one aspect of there personality is ridiculous, but yet it happens all the time. Jem is the best example of why you shouldn't do that.

-Concerning Jem: You just got to love that girl! When I read other stories I often got bored of the main characters quite easily, because they seemed to have it all: Looks, brains, wits and even a tragic past to complete the picture of a sad yet(or because of that even more so) beautiful and strong person. Most of the time it doesn't feel right: Too much, not very credible and sometimes even annoying. But not in Jem's case. I couldn't really tell you why, I guess you're just very good at what you do:)

-At last I'd like to add one critisism, even if it is a small one: Although I complete understand that Sirius really likes Jem and is starting to fall for her, maybe it becomes apparent a tad to early? At least for my liking. That being said, you made it up by letting the boys explain to Jem what just happend. It was very sweet how they described her and after that I considered it as only logical for Sirius to show such strong emotions so early on in their relationship.

All in all I really enjoyed reading this story so far and am already excited for your next update.

Keep up the good work and please excuse any possible misspelling or grammatical mistakes I made. I am still in the process of learning.

9/10

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, I can't say how much this review made me smile. I'm glad you like it so much and I'm excited for you to read more, I promise to add another chapter soon.

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