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Review:alicia and anne says:
An earthquake? Yikes!

Hahaha the huffing at traffic, and moaning about the broken bridge. I love it.

Oh no! The bridge is being attacked, and it's going to break! It's Death Eaters, I know it is!

And I was right! It's Bellatrix! Curse her! I hope that Robert doesn't die, I want him to get off of the bridge and to safety :(

This is so terrifying! I just want to help them all and curse Bellatrix away!

NO!! HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE! I NEED ROBERT TO ESCAPE! ROBERT NEEDS TO LIVE!

This was so brilliantly written, you've done such an amazing job writing a muggle seeing magic for the first time. It was all starting out so nicely with a traffic jam and then bam! You hit me right in the feels!

Please write a sequel where Robert survives! Please *begs*

Author's Response: Hi Tammi!

Have I told you recently how amazing you are for leaving everyone such lovely reviews? If not, let me do so now. You are amazing!

I feel like there isn't anyone in the world who doesn't get frustrated with traffic.

Robert definitely gets off the bridge, although I have a feeling it's not quite what you meant.

Bellatrix is definitely awful.

I kind of wanted to keep the ending a bit ambiguous and let the reader decide whether he lives or dies.

I'm glad you like what I did with this.

Maybe I'll have to bring Robert back in another story down the road somewhere.

Thanks so much for this lovely review!

~Kaitlin


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