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Review:dumbledore_wannabe says:
Well, I've finally caught up with all the current chapters and am officially sucked into the story. The plot thickens! I have great confidence that we haven't seen the last of a few currently-missing folks, and have some ideas about how they could return. I also have a thought about the potential redemption of a certain someone who I don't think is as black as he's been painted thus far (no, NOT Voldemort!). I don't, however, have a good idea about what Hermione is up to. Very curious to find out!

I suppose I'm liking Michael better now even if he's still not my favorite. (Some spy, though, to expect that a bunch of drunk teenagers could keep Luna's identity a secret... ah well.)

I'm really enjoying what you're doing with Luna. The way you write her is so true to the feel of how J. K. Rowling wrote her, but you have fleshed her out and given her substance, the type of substance and strength that I think JKR implied was there.

Almost 100 more chapters to come. How awesome! :) Thanks for writing this story!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm going to just be totally honest hear and say how good it feels to have someone get up to date and really be enjoying the story :)

I will not confirm or deny any plot points or potential dramatic return of some slowly-warming characters ;) Hermione's motivations will become clear soon, however.

I actually like your comment about Michael being a poor spy, Hermione actually calls him out on that word for word after the duel with Snape, something to the effect of "What kind of spy gets peer pressured into fighting a teacher?"

I'm glad you're liking Luna so far, though :) In my opinion she only gets better from here on. I just submitted the next chapter, you may have noticed its been a while since I added one. I was keeping this somewhat a surprise, but I recently joined Deviantart in order to commission a whole lot of pieces to use in Moonlight War :) (The validators are going to LOVE me with my 15 chapter updates to add images). I wanted to hold off updates until I had at least half of those images in, but I decided to go ahead and add chapter 30 now. I'll put an authors note in the most recent chapter once I get those images in, but be on the lookout for them, the pieces I've received so far are really great quality, they have some amazing artits over there.

Until then, thanks so much for the kind words, reads, and reviews. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story even more than the first section :)


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