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Review:Claudius says:
So apparently I have given the honnor of leaving the first review on your story. The first thing that comes to my mind is that it has an enormous amount of dept. I can feel there's a story behind a lot of the characters, a veil of mystery that will dissapear in due time... No seriously, I loved it. It would have been far more easy to write a story about an average auror who disguises himself as a student and tries to protect Harry Potter, but no, your character is much more... interesting? I'll definitely stick arround to see where this is going, for you have stirred my appetite ;) I want more! Keep up the good work, I enjoy your style!

Author's Response: Wow, I can't believe I got a review only two chapters in. Thanks so much man, it means a lot to me to get feedback already. I'm glad you find Michael interesting, but I'd actually put him as about the third most interesting character overall. It's mostly a product of the fact that I started this story when I was fifteen - six years ago now - and frankly my writing has improved a LOT since then. But I'm glad you're really enjoying the story so far, I'll be posting chapters as often as the queue allows, hopefully the next will be up in about three days. Thanks again for the review,

Spirit of Fire


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