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Review:ShadowRose says:
House Cup 2014 Review

So, I realized I misspelled my own name in my last review. That's awkward. :P

KIANNA how could you do this to me??? You're really testing my self control to review before going on to the next chapter here. Gah your cliffhangers will be the death of me.

Your details at the start of the chapter, particularly regarding the map and cartography, were just lovely. "The light of the candle flickered against the white canvas lining of the tent, causing spectres to dance and flicker across the screen." SUCH A PRETTY SENTENCE.

I'm starting to really, really like Charlotte - she seems like a genuinely nice person and she actually cares about Rose. I do feel bad for Rose though, because as sweet as Charlotte may be, it doesn't make up for the fact that she's 100 years away from the people she loves. I love the little detail about WWI you threw in - it definitely adds to the fact that they're in a different era with different issues right now. Although I do have my doubts about them reaching Acanthus in a timely manner... I get the feeling something's a little off - things are going too smoothly, and that doesn't usually ever happen... something's gotta go wrong.

Ugh, we were just about to find out more about the mysterious man, and then all the craziness happens! While I'm not too happy that we're still missing details about him, I do hope that Scorpius, Dalila, and Rashidi can get away from him. So let's hope that Stunning Spell hit its target!

Another awesome chapter, Kiana!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Bahahaha, I always do that too, so don't worry (plus I didn't even notice until you said :P). See it's sort of good then as you can improve your self-control which is always a good thing to do. But I'm sorry about the cliff-hangers!

Aw, thank you! ♥

Yay for Charlotte, as it's nice for Rose to have a BFF in this era because everyone wants one of those. It's just strange how you can get on with people even if you are a 100 years apart if that makes any sense? I'm really glad that you liked the WWI bit, because in my headcanon wizards took part in it too, so that's why it was thrown in there.

You will find out more about him as Scorpius gets all macho and starts being scary and asking questions, so more will be found out, don't worry!

Thanks for another awesome review, Taylor!


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