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Review:ShadowRose says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Hello again Kiana!

Haha, I had a feeling that the group of people Rose and Lorcan were with were wizards - if they're at all related to the unidentifiable man Scorpius is currently dealing with, which you've already hinted at, then they'd pretty much have to be magical. But now I really have to know whether or not the map works! It's not even the end of the chapter and you've already left a cliffhanger... that takes talent.

Oh, and now we're back with Scorpius and the mysterious man. My gosh, this foreshadowing is killing me! So Scorpius kills someone, but we don't know who, the mysterious man is stripped of something he was supposedly destined to have, but we don't know what, and somehow Scorpius goes back in time, but once again, we don't know how! Ack, there's so much coming up in the future chapters!

I also couldn't help but feel sorry for Scorpius towards the end - "The monster trait seemed to be a genetic thing in his family. It was as if he knew that this would always be his fate, leading that life." My heart just broke for him here - he's spent all his life trying to avoid being like his dad and grandfather, but is now destined to become exactly like them both, despite having a personality and character totally opposite to either of them. Poor guy.

This was another really entertaining chapter, and as usual, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Hi again Taylor!

Yes, they were because if they were Muggles it would just be a little boring for them, and magic just makes everything even more exciting really! Aw, thank you! It also helps having POV changes, because then you could have a potential 3 cliff-hangers in one chapter, but that would have been a little too mean if I did that.

I'm sorry about the foreshadowing so please don't die! Yes, this is a very key thing, very, very, very, very key thing like remember this foreshadowing and then when a certain something happens you may be able to figure it out earlier than other people did. That's all I'll say on this subject for now...

I know, he really does need a hug, as he's so different from his family and just wants to love people and be nice and then he gets haunted by all their faults. Gah, it's so just so sad, I want to hug him so much right now!

Thanks for another great review, Taylor! :D


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