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Review:ShadowRose says:
House Cup 2014 Review

Hi Kiana!

Okay, so I was hoping that finally having a chapter from Scorpius's POV would explain who the voice belonged to and what on earth has happened. It did, to an extent, but I think I'm actually a bit more confused now than I was before. My gosh, be gentle on poor Scorpius! I feel defensive of him and I really don't like him being in pain - especially when it hurts his self-confidence as well! Poor Scorpius, thinking he's not brave enough...

I have to admit, I thought Rose and Lorcan had it bad, being 100 years in the past, but hey, at least the people they're with don't torture them. I'm a bit nervous for their fate though, because I feel like something bad's going to happen to them based on what the man talking to Scorpius said. Ack.

I really love the part from Hermione's POV. It's different than any of the other characters, but you really spotlight her insecurities and her worries - it's something you do anytime you're inside a character's head, and I feel like it really helps bring them to life. I feel bad that she feels like she's been a bad mother, because she really does know Rose well and definitely cares for her. I sense a bit of tension towards Scorpius though... I wonder how that one will pan out.

Overall, another great chapter - with every chapter, the tension gets even higher and this story gets even more addicting!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)

Author's Response: Hi Taylor!

I'm sorry about the confusion, but things with the voice, and the man, and the person who will later have a name tend to remain a bit confusing until you find out his name and then it all starts to make a little sense. Scorpius will be out of pain eventually, so it will all be ok.

Ha, yes, for once they actually have it better as these people are nice to them for now. Hmm, that is a good point to remember, but don't worry too much right now as it's a couple of chapters until things do start to happen.

Aw, I'm glad you liked her, as she crops up now and then from this chapter onwards. Her difficulties with Rose and Scorpius are followed up throughout this story and eventually they will be cleared up so don't worry too much.

Aw, thank you so much, you're so lovely, Taylor, because each of these reviews really are making me smile :D


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