House Cup 2014 Review
Hey Kiana - I'm back again!
Before I say anything else, I just wanna say that I really love your description style (I don't know if that's actually a thing, but I'm making it a thing). You give a ton of really great detail, but never overdo it, and you don't hang on the description when there are more important things that tie into the plot going on. It makes your writing so much fun to read!
YAY - I have to say that I'm really excited that Rose and Scorpius are friends! I feel like they always start off hating each other, so it's definitely a breath of fresh air to see that they're already friendly with one another - I love anything that breaks out of the traditional cliches. Plus, Scorpius as a character seems great. While we don't see a ton of him in this chapter, it looks like he's a really down-to-earth and sweet guy so far - which, once again, is really refreshing. I've used that phrase (or a similar one) way too many times in my reviews of these past two chapters, but it really is true - this story's definitely very different from a lot of other stories I've read, and that's a really great thing!
And I love that you've already thrown in a hint about Rose having feelings for Scorpius, even if she doesn't quite know it yet. Also, I think I like Dalila so far - she seems pretty sweet, but at the same time, I feel like she's hiding something - maybe it's just her shyness though and I'm just being overly suspicious haha. Oh well, I guess only time will tell!
Once again, I really enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yay, hi again Taylor!
Haha, I'm not sure if it is a thing but maybe we can make it a thing :P Thank you so much though because this was the first story where I actually decided to pay attention to description and make it happen rather than it be a fleeting thought so it means so much to me you liked it!
Yay, they are and perhaps maybe more than that later ;) Yes, I used to be a massive fan of them hating one another but I grew bored of it easily, and I just love them being together so this way it can be done quicker and there's less shouting which is always good. Don't worry, I haven't noticed you using that phrase, so it's nothing to worry about, but it means so much to me that you do think that because I thought everyone would hate me for turning next gen into this :P
Aw, poor Dalila! Everyone always suspects her when she really does do nothing, she is just shy, so don't worry about her, just embrace her and you'll be fine!
Thanks again for another fab review, Taylor! ♥