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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello there! I came across this story while browsing the Recently Added, and while I haven't watched Spooks or MI5, I decided to give this story a shot, and I'm glad I did!

You've got a great start here, and some parts were absolutely hilarious. I do feel for poor Harry and his utterly incompetent bunch of recruits; this doesn't bode well indeed, that the top Aurors of the Ministry act like a bunch of pranking children! :P I think Harry might be a lot better off if he ditched his whole team (high scores or not) and hired more new recruits, though of course, training would have to be provided etc.

I really enjoyed Julius Burke's arrogance and coldness, and yet he still is childish enough to put itching powder in West's clothes :P And the part with Kingsley and the All Quotes Quill made me giggle a bit. I love the idea of that; it's so typically Weasley - just the thing George would do: gifting the Minister a prank item.

And that was a great ending to this chapter. I'm quite curious to see how things turn out, and how Kingsley and Harry will work around the Statute of Secrecy.

This is a wonderful and funny start! Your writing is very easy to read and witty; it really is a shame that this story doesn't have more reviews. Great work!

-teh

Author's Response: Hello there,

I am so glad you are enjoying the story and I sincerely hope you will continue to like it. The All Quotes Quill was just one such thing that found its way into the story without me having intended it, so I am glad you liked that.
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