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Review:LilyLou says:
LilyLou here with your requested review!

Even though this is against my will-not-read list, I figured I'd give it a shot. And I'm glad I did. While it bugs me that she's part of the DA and is friends with all those like Ginny, Harry, and Hermione, I do my best to ignore all of that.

And when I ignore all that, I'm absolutely in love with this story. I will most definitely be keeping an eye on it for upcoming chapters! It's amazing! I love how you wrote Draco. Original characters are always difficult to write, and there wasn't anything that I caught that was OOC in any way. Perhaps that he trusted her so easily, but then again all Draco really wanted was someone who understood and helped.

The grammar in this story is pretty good, in my opinion. Whether or not you have a beta, good job on that part!

Well, like I said, amazing story so far. This isn't a very lengthy review, but I just can't think of anything else to say! I'll be keeping an eye on this story! And I won't hesitate to review again!

Keep writing!

-Janelle

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