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Review:ewsoucf7 says:
Well, I must say I loved the interaction between the doctor and the Queen. I thought that it was very well thought out, and very realistic too, with the doctor telling her to wait because he was busy. I must say I giggled a lot at that part.

Spelling, grammar and flow are very good. I don't see any negatives in those three within this chapter which is very refreshing.

I think you've got the character of the doctor completely spot on. He's very strange but completely witty and lovable. I really like him as a character, and the fact he's coming to save their world just makes me like him even more.

I am still unsure on the other characters, as I still think we haven't had much information about them, which definitely makes me wary of them.

The plot seems to be developing nicely, with a little bit more being revealed in each chapter. I think that it is a great way to introduce more concepts and plot as it creates mystery too, yet it isn't too hard to follow. Another great chapter again. =]

Author's Response: I'm so glad I got the Doctor right. He's such a hard character to write...

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