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full moon murder by Diezal325
Chapter 1 : hogwarts express sixth year
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Ok, so this is my all new fan fiction! I swear to Merlin I will update as often as possible J hope you like it, it kinda came to me randomly but I’ve got it all planned out and I hope it works!



I turn around to the sound of my name. Sirius Black bounds up to me, like a demented puppy, and slings a casual arm on my shoulder, and sweeps his hair out of his face, grinning.

“Hey, Black.” I say, smiling slightly.

“You haven’t seen Evans anywhere have you? Prongs wants to talk to her.”

I have often wondered about this, but why Prongs? What is he, a fork?


I look over my shoulder and James Potter grins at me, raising a hand in acknowledgment.

“Nope.” I say, “I was actually wondering that myself!”

“Mm. She should be here soon.” Sirius shrugs, looking up at the clock. It’s ten to eleven, “Never late and all that-“

“You talking about me?”

We both turn and see Lily.

“Lily!” I throw my arms around her, “I haven’t seen you in ages!”

Sirius rolls his eyes, “Guys, you saw each other two weeks ago!”

This is true; I went round to Lily’s house in the summer for a few days. But that doesn’t really count.

“Whatever!” Lily sticks her tongue out a Sirius and links her arm through mine. Laughing, we go off to find our friends.


Maybe I should explain. My name is Victoria Turner. I have elbow length hair which is a light honey kind of colour, and a heavy side fringe which could be called emo… If emo’s could be called blonde? Have to think on that. My eyes are mossy brown and I have a few freckles on my nose. Medium height. Thin but not skinny- does that make sense?!

I'm in Gryffindor sixth year and I'm seventeen on the twelfth of May.  I share a dorm with Lily Evans, Alice Smith, Marlene McKinnon and Mary MacDonald. I think that covers everything… Oh, yes. The Marauders. James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew. They’ve all got nicknames that they all call each other, they’re pretty dumb and I seriously don’t get them though! But they seem to be some sort of code… I’ll figure them out one day.


My honest opinions of them?




James Prongs Potter: Pros: Good looking, good at Quidditch



      Cons: Arrogant, bullies Slytherins (although they do sometimes deserve it!)



Sirius Padfoot Black: Pros: Handsome, has a motorbike <3



      Cons: Cocky as hell, vain



Remus Moony Lupin: Pros: Smart, cute, friendly ;)



      Cons: Always seems pale and ill



Peter Wormtail Pettigrew: Pros: Innocent, random…



       Cons: Annoying, high pitched voice, greedy, addiction to cheese


You get the general idea. I like Remus most, probably. But there seems to be something dodgy about him. I can’t quite place my finger on it.


Yup, you probably guessed it- the main character is based on me, although unfortunately I do not go to Hogwarts :L wish I could, lol. Anyway, any good things, bad things? Improvements? Anything would be good! Thank you!! Xx

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