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The Troubles of Teenagers by SiriuslyLily
Chapter 1 : Unexpectedness and Stuff
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Hi people this is chp. 1 of this story. I don't own HP
Julie xx


I ran my fingers along the train's wall, my feet dragging along the carpet.
In each of the compartments there were happy people, catching up from over the

"Haha! I actually beat you at exploding snap! Take that, Moony!" Peter cried. Psh, I could beat anyone at exploding snap, anytime, anywhere, any day.

I honestly don't know why they let him be a Marauder. He doesn't exactly do anything.

I peeked into the compartment, seeing Sirius, James, Remus and Peter. James and Sirius were having deep discussion, probably planning another prank. I better not be involved, again.

Remus and Peter were playing exploding snap, although Remus wasn't really paying attention.

Whoo! Go Remus!

"I love her, Padfoot, I really do. What have I done wrong?" So... He really actually loves me? I thought it was a really bad prank.

Yay. I love you too, James, but I'm not going to admit that any-time soon.

Sirius sighed, obviously answering this question before. "Maybe it's because every time you see her you turn into an obnoxious prat?" No, you can keep being a prat.

... Not because I think it's cute or anything (awkward.) ...
James sighed at his best friend. He looked to be thinking for a minute.

"Do you think I should stop asking her out?"

The boys made to get up, so I ran into the closest compartment.

Which unluckily beheld Severus Snape, all alone. He doesn't have friends anymore, but I guess that's what you get when you're mean. He looked up at me,

"Lily, why are you here?" He asked softly. But I still, and never will, forgive him for calling me a Mudblood in Fifth year.

"Well Severus, I was just leaving. I didn't know you were in here."

Then I ran out with a gust of wind whooshing behind me. That's actually quite cool. 'Lily Evans, Super Woman!'But of course colliding with none other than James Potter.

I stumbled back into the wall, while he tried to keep me from falling further. "Evans, how are you?"

Don't get bitchy, Lily.

I smiled up at him, but he seemed surprised, probably waiting for me to scream at him.

Not today, Mr Potter. Not today.

"I'm fine, James, what about you?" He grinned at me, and pulled my into a (warm, amazing) hug.

That is a bit weird. More than a bit.

"Potter, are you alright?" I joked. He nodded his head. Then he started to get anxious. James ran a hand through his jet black hair.

"Lily, you know how I have always been asking you out, always asking for you to be my girlfriend?"

It was my turn to nod. If he asks me out again, this time I'll say YES.
"Well, I thought I'd only ask one more time. Because I know it annoys you." Shit, he's got it all wrong!


He took my hands in his. He took a deep breath, then continued.

"Lily, will you go out with me? I ... I love you, Lily." He closed his eyes. Probably knowing I'd turn him down again.


"Sure. "

He opened his eyes, speechless. Ha, I'd got him this time! He blinked a few times.

"Really? Did Sirius tell you to do this?" I shook my head. Stupid Sirius.
James put his hand on my shoulder. Then kissed me. Fireworks. That's what they say. And they were right. It's about time, anyway.
After years of nagging from everyone, mainly James. Now I'm happy.


James and I walked into his compartment hand in hand. Gasps and silence filled the air. They looked like they've just seen God.

Well, I am a Goddess. Haha, James would probably say something like that.

I grinned to myself.

Not that that's weird or anything ...

"It's real right? It's not a joke?" Remus asked. I glared at him, to prove my point. James pulled me into a tight hug.

I plopped into the seat and James beside me. Sirius was literally about to die. Siriusly. Okay, enough puns.

"Could someone please explain?" Came from Sirius. I sighed dramatically.

"I was wandering the depths of the scarlet train when a certain male of a certain height approached me. In other words I fell. The male, named James, start conversing with myself. I had been bamboozled by a question. Don't get me wrong, this was a special question. I had given my answer, and then I came back to three other males, and started to tell a horrifying tale where I had to execute the most horrible of sins. I had to tap dance. "

They gave me the strangest of looks.

"Tap dance?" Asked Remus. I nodded solemnly.

"It was torture."

"Why did they make you do it?" Peter asked, truly horrified. Haha.

"Because I was too cool for them." Peter nodded understandingly. He is really dumb. No lies.


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