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His most faithful follower by Ron 4 Hermione
Chapter 1 : The death of her!
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 Bellatrix was having the time of her life, she was going to prove to her master just how much of a faithful follower she was. She had already eliminated so many of the Dark Lord's enimies and she was on the hunt for more. Then she spotted a red-haired girl that she recognised as the blood-traitor weasly that had been in the potter boy's thought during the fiasco at Malfoy Manour. Though the fiasco was most certainly not her fault. It appeared the Potter boy was also in her thoughts too, she was looking for him. Starting to duel the blood-traitor she was soon joined by the mud-blood Granger and some other idiotic child. They were all fighting there hardest but they were no match for her. Looking around Bellatrix heard the Potter boy's thoughts at the same time he spotted the girl and he also spotted her. He was hidden beneath what appeared to be an invisibility cloack, she hadn't even been aware that he had one. A malicious smile crept on the Bellatrix's face and she twirled her wand in her hands before shooting a non-verbal killing spell at the blood-traitor.

The girl had faster reflexes then Bellatrix had first thought and she quickly dodged the spell, but it had angered the Potter boy which was exactly what she wanted. He made to come towards her and she was ready for him, this was it. She would kill the boy and the Dark lord would see how amazing she was; she would have everything she wanted and more besides.

Then the plan changed!

Suddenly it wasn't the Potter boy running towards her but a women. One quick glance of her mind told Bellatrix all she needed to know. It was time's like this Bellatrix realished in being an accomplished at legilimency.This women was the blood-traitor girl's mother and she was now out to avenge the women who had shot a killing spell at her daughter.

“NOT MY DAUGHTER, YOU BITCH!”* Screamed the blood-traitor women at Bellatrix as she raced forward pushing past the Potter boy and taking her cloak off her arms. Bellatrix roared with laughter as she turned her attention towards the blood-traitor women.

The women screamed at  the three kids to move as she raced in front of them and started dueling Bellatrix. To Bellatrix's surprise the blood-traitor women could fight and fight she was going to do. This women was good, maybe just as good as Bellatrix was but she was neve going to admit that, no she was going to finish the blood-traitor for good.

The blood-traitor was screaming something at Bellatrix but she couldn't tell what as some kids rushed forward to try and help her. This was going on for far too long and she tried to torment the woment to distract her.

“What will happen to your children when I've killed you? When Mummy's gone the same way as Freddie?”* Bellatrix laughed as she taunted the blood-traitor women, dodging the spells that what being sent her way.

“You-will-never-tocuh-our-children-again!" * The blood-traitor responded, her voice getting louder and more serious. They were both fighting to kill and neither side was showing any sign of giving in. Bellatrix let out a cold, malicious laugh as she shot another spell towards her opponent. The blood-traitor women responded with her own deadly spell and this one hit its target. The spell went through Bellatrix's outstretched arms and hit her square on her chest.

The effect was instant.

Bellatrix realised a moment too late what had happened and the roar that filled the hall made Voldermort scream in fury. His most faithful follower, his most devoted servant was gone. He turned his attention to the person responsiable for her downfall and pointed his wand at her.

A/N: The following lines are from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows by J.K. Rowling.
*What will happen to your children when I've killed you? When Mummy's gone the same way as Freddie?- Page 590
*You-will-never-touch-our-children-again!- Page 590


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