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Denial. by PoppyPotter
Chapter 4 : Of Frankie, Dom and France.
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Ages and Ages later we arrived at the lake (Ally had fallen asleep again on my shoulder this time and Dom was pretending to sleep on Frankie) there was ten cabins around the lake so the NMs got their own cabin (Uncle George half jokenly put celibacy charms on the cabin but not as many as Uncle Ron had placed on the cabin Albus' lot where sleeping in!)

 

Inside the cabin there where two rooms so we split in to girls and boys, I put Ally down on her bed and went in to my room where I shoved on my onsies and jumped in to bed.

 

'James?" Freddy?' Frankie asked hesitantly.

 

'Yes mate' We both said sitting up in our beds.

 

'I think Dom might like me' He said turning bright pink.

 

'Wait wait' Said Freddy, 'You've only just realised.'

 

'Um yes' Said Frankie going pinker.

 

'So all the years when she hit on you, the two times she asked you to the ball, the four times she's asked you to Madame Puddifoots and when she gave you a date with her for your birthday, and you've only just realised?' I said holding back laughter, Freddy not managing and chuckling.

 

'Mate I think it's safe to say she has the hots for you' I said supportively...or as supportive as I get.

 

'You're sure?' Frankie said nervously

 

'Very sure, you should ask her out.' I said while Freddy laughed some more.

 

'Ok I will' He said breaking in to a massive smile and bounding out the room

 

'I didn't say now!' I shouted after him but he wasn't listening so I followed him in to the girls room where they where Avery and Dom where talking in their beds, half asleep.

 

'Whatcha want?' Said Dom yawning wearing green onsises with frogs on them.

 

'willyougoutwithme' Frankie mumbled quickly.

 

'What?' She yawned again.

 

'Will you go out with me' He asked turning bright pink.

 

'Yeah we can all go swimming or something in the morning' She said closing her eyes and lying back down in her bed.

 

'No like will you be my girlfriend' He asked going pinker than I though humanly possible.

 

'Frank Longbottom, I have waited five years for you to ask that!' She said pouncing on him and snogging his face off, Frankie enthusiastically snogging back.

 

'I'm guessing that's a yes then' Avery said rolling her eyes and walking up to me,

 

'I'll just go sleep in Frankie's bed then as I don't think they're going anywhere anytime soon' She said walking out while I thought it a good idea to take Ally in to the boys room instead (Quite a shock she'd get if she woke up to find her best mate snogging her twin brother...actually most of the shock would probably come from Frankie finally realising...)

 

'Aves said they're snogging?' Freddy asked.

 

'Yeah they are it's pretty disgusting in fact' I replied pulling Ally in my bed (Mind out of the gutter I'd just sleep on the floor)

 

'Thanks Merlin for the celibacy charm or they might be doing more' said Freddy shuddering making me shudder as well.

 

I'm calling it a night then' Freddy said closing his eyes as Avery snored in Frankie's bed and Ally's hair changed to green before going back rainbow making me wonder what she was dreaming about.

 

~*~

 

'Kids!' Dad's voice shouted through the door of the cabin. 'Everyone's going for a swim and we're going to have a BBQ for lunch!' He yelled making me check the clock on the wall to see it was 11:30 already.

 

'We'll be out in a little while' I shouted in reply to find every one waking up.

 

'Are we there?' Asked Ally changing her hair back to normal.

 

'Yeah and Dom and Frankie are in the other room they where snogging' I said grinning.

 

'He finally noticed she fancied the pants off him them?' She laughed.

 

'Yep it was really gross' Said Aves stumbling out of bed and in to the bathroom.

 

'I'll go and wake them up' I said walking out and in to the "girls" room where they where Dom was sleeping on top of Frankie on the floor (thank goodness they both still had their onesies on)

'WAKE UP LOVER BIRDS' I shouted and they both stirred Frankie jumping considerably when he noticed Dom on top of him.

 

'It wasn't a dream?' He demanded

 

'Nope' Said Dom waking up and kissing him on the lips making him go pink again.

 

'Get dressed we're going swimming' I said pulling Dom off Frankie and walking out where Aves and Ally where waiting in towels to get dressed (Their suitcases where in the room) as Frankie walked out still pink and back in to our room.

 

'Well played Frankster' Freddy said chuckling.

 

'Thanks' He mumbled picking out a pair of swimming trunks and going to get changed in to them in the bathroom while me and Freddy got changed in the room, him in to some bright purple trunks and me in to some orange ones with blue snitches on them, walking in to the living room and waiting for the girls who walked out around twenty minutes later (I have no idea why it took them twenty minutes to get on swimsuits...but)

 

Aves walked out wearing a black swim suits with massive cut out panels all over it, Dom had a red bandeau bikini on (Frankie was staring) and Ally had an orange triangle bikini on.

 

'Hey we match!' She said grinning at me looking damn fine in that bikini.

 

'Yes we do' I grinned back while Dom and Frankie started snogging again, Merlin they where as bad as Rose and Scorp.

 

'Hey Frankie!' Ally exclaimed cheerfully making them break apart which made Dom look a bit miffed.

 

'What is it dearest twin?' He asked.

 

'Well I just thought, you two are going have to tell Dom's parents, including her Dad! Did you hear he got those scars fighting with some one who wanted to go out with Dom?' Said Ally making Frankie look terrified even though he knew exactly how Uncle Bill really got those scars.

 

'Shit' Said Dom 'I forgot about Dad'

 

'So did I' Said Frankie looking scared.

 

'Come on mate your Dad killed that snake I'm sure you can tell Uncle Bill' Freddy said rolling his eyes.

 

'I'm no where near as brave as Dad' He mumbled.

 

'You're even braver if you're going to put up with Dom' I said laughing.

 

'Hey' Dom said shooting me an evil glare. 'You are brave Frankie' She said grabbing his hand and pulling him out of the cabin.

 

'I give it one minute before Bill explodes or Frankie passes out' Said Ally as we followed them out.

 

'I give it thirty seconds' Said Aves.

 

'two minutes' I said

 

'fifteen seconds' said Freddy

 

'How much we betting?' I asked.

 

'Two galleons' Said Ally sitting down on a picnic blanket next to my Mum and Dad, Aunt Mione and Ron and Fred's parents.

 

'Whats happening?' Asked Uncle George looking in the direction we where looking.

 

'Frankie finally asked Dom out so they're telling her parents' Ally said laughing.

 

'Finally' Said Mum laughing along side Ally and looking over at where they had just made it to Uncle Bill and Tante Fleur.

 

'Start the clock' Said Ally and I looked at my watch staring at it as the seconds ticked by.

'Frankie just passed out what's the time on the clock?' She asked.

 

'One minute two' I said through gritted teeth handing Ally two galleons while Aves and Freddy did the same and Uncle George hi-fived her.

 

'Well done girl' He said laughing as Ally scrambled to her feet and ran across to Frankie, returning under one of his arms to help him walk while Dom was helping him walk on the other side.

 

'Smooth Frankster' I said raising my eyebrows receiving a glare from Dom.

 

'It's fine' She said comforting Frankie 'Dad said he though Frankie was a fine young man and expected him to be a gentleman' Said Dom proudly making Frankie turn pink again.

 

'That's great' smiled Ally 'but no more public snogging please!'

 

'Yeah please don't kids' Said Dad.

 

'Now you just have to tell Neville and Hannah' Said Ron making Dom pale considerably.

 

'Chill Dom my parents love you' Alls said rolling out her towel next to the picnic blanket and where I was lying down.

 

'Yeah as your friend! They're going to think I'm a slut or something and not good enough for Frankie!' She said getting pale again.

 

'Ok firstly Dom, Avery is the slut around here-'

 

'Damn right I am'

 

'-and Freddy's our loveable man whore-'

 

'You better be using protection!' Said Aunt Angie

 

'-and plus, no offence Frankie, we all know you're a little bit out of Frankie's league.'

 

'It's alright Sis I know I am' Said Frankie pulling Dom closer to him.

 

'Aww I'm not out of you're league' Said Dom kissing him.

 

'NO SNOGGING!' Mum, Dad and Ally shouted at the same time.

 

'Thank god I put those celibacy charms on their cabin' Uncle George stage whispered to to Uncle Ron.

 

'You know I think Rose's cabin could use some more charms' Uncle Ron said jumping up and walking in the direction of the cabin.

 

'Ron! Leave them!' Shouted Auntie Mione after him, not that he was listening.

 

'Urg!' She said scrambling to her feet and running after them.

 

'Lets swim to the other side of the lake' Said Ally jumping to her feet.

 

'You wont be able to swim that far Alls' Said Dad.

 

'Eveline just has thought' Ally pointed over to where Eveline was slowly doing laps of the entire lake (Al and the rest of his lot where not out yet so I'm guessing they where all asleep).

 

'Eveline's a very good swimmer' Said Mum quickly 'James why don't you ask Fleur for the keys to the boat'

 

'Okay!' I said jumping to my feet, helping Avery and then Ally up and letting Freddy get himself up.

 

'Lets go esteemed Friends and Lovebirds' I said skipping (In a manly way) to Tante Fleur.

 

'Why if it isn't my favourite Auntie' I said smiling in a charming way.

 

'What do you want James?' Uncle Bill said.

 

'Keys to the boat' I said smiling in the charming way again while Ally rolled her eyes.

 

'Do you promicee to be carful with zee boat?' Tante Fleur asked.

 

'Of course Tante Fleur!' I said doing the smile yet again.

 

'Okay ere are zee keys' She said handing them over to me.

 

'Uh James' Uncle Bill said pulling me aside from the other 'Keep an eye on Dom and Frankie for me please, I know Frankie's a nice lad but Dom can be...uh persuasive'

 

'I'm on it' I said smiling and walking over to the boat, well it was more of a small yacht but we all go on and I set sail for the middle of the lake (it was a massive massive lake)

 

'Pixie vodka?' Freddy asked bringing out a bottle from his pocket which he must of enchanted to fit it in.

 

'Yes!' Ally said grabbing the bottle and taking a massive sip.

 

'Easy Alls you're not good with your drink remember?' Said Frankie taking the bottle off her and handing it to Dom instead.

 

'That's an understatement' I snorted

 

'Yeah, yeah, yeah' Said Ally rolling her eyes as about 15 owls flew across the lake landing in different locations around it.

 

'Looks like Hogwarts owls' Said Frankie as six landed on the Yacht.

 

'Yeah I think so' I said taking a letter off one of the owls and seeing the Hogwarts crest on the back, looking on the front to see it was addressed to "Miss Avery Jenkins"

'Aves' I said handing it to her as I handed around the rest of them.

 

'How many books did your Dad bloody set us this years?' Dom said to Frankie.

 

'They're all interesting ones though' Ally said looking at Dom's list.

 

'Says the crazy plant lady' Dom laughed hugging Ally to show it was a joke while I ripped open my letter and two badges fell out, a new Quidditch captain one, but what was the others one?

Merlin's baggy pants.

Headboy.

 

'Whatcha got their Jamesie boy?' Asked Ally grabbing the badge out of my hand before I could stop her.

 

'Merlin' She said her eyes widening 'James is head boy'

 

'We're all doomed' Said Avery

 

'Funny joke Alls!' Said Freddy chuckling

 

'No he really is' Said Dom looking at the badge in Ally's hand.

 

'Ok we're all doomed' Said Freddy.

 

'Hey don't be mean' I said snatching it back, 'I'm going to be the sexiest head boy since my Granddad was one'

 

'Of course you are sweetie' Ally said rolling her eyes and ripping open her own letter and a badge fell out which I immediately snatched off the ground.

 

'Ally's head girl' I said widening my eyes.

 

'The world is going to end' Frankie said.

 

'He's obviously lying Frankie' Said Ally.

 

'I'm not, catch' I said throwing the badge at Ally which she caught with her seeker reflexes.

 

'Merlin. He wasn't.' She said with wide eyes before reading the letter that came with it aloud in a fake posh voice.

 

'To Miss Alice Augusta Longbottom, as you are very aware the Grandfather and Grandmother of your friend, and the Father and Mother of your Godfather where once Head Boy and Girl; James Potter the first was once the biggest trouble maker of Hogwarts, the year Dumbledore appointed them as Headboy and Girl the Marauders' antics plummeted by around 70%, personally to be truthful I am hoping this will have the same affect on "The New Marauders" antics as well thus being my reasons for appointing you and Mr Potter in to these positions, I have not informed your Father about you achievement but he will know by the end of the week so if you want to tell him yourself you have the week.

I am very glad that this years heads are two of my old house, two Gryffindor heads hasn't happen since James and Lily Potter the firsts.

 

Minrerva McGonagal

Headmistress of Hogwarts

Order of Merlin First Class.

 

'Good luck to her if she thinks that's going to stop us' Freddy snorted.

 

'The heads dorms are really nice!' Said Aves 'The living room is massive, you can have parties in there and the bathroom is more like a pool!'

 

'Been in there a lot have you?' Freddy asked raising his eyebrows.

 

'I've slept with both the Head boys from the last two years' Said Aves looking a little proud.

 

'Uncle George is going to take the mick out of me' I mumbled.

 

'Yeah probably' Freddy chuckled.

 

'They've just light the BBQ should we go back?' Dom asked pointing to the rising smoke.

 

'Yep' I said strearing the boat back to shore and making my way over to the BBQ where the whole family was gathered around.

 

'DEAR FAMILY' I yelled so that everyone turned around 'I THOUGHT I'D TELL YOU NOW, BEFORE YOU ALL FOUND OUT ANYWAY THAT I AM HEAD BOY' I held up my badge, 'I'M NOT LYING AND ALLY WAS MADE HEAD AS WELL IN A HOPE WE'D STOP TROUBLE MAKING THIS YEAR.' I finished and turned around to see Ally's hair was pink.

 

'Congratulations Son' Dad said hugging me 'And you too Ally' he said realising me and hugging her.

 

'I think you'll have Hogwarts in flames by the end of the week but well done James' Mum said laughing.

~*~


It was the end of the first week (it was going to be a two week holiday) and I couldn't sleep so I was sat in the living room watching a muggle television.

 

'Oh hi' Said Ally walking in to the living room with rainbow hair wearing onsises with bunny rabbits on them. (Mine for tonight had broomsticks on)

 

'Couldn't sleep?' I asked looking at her as she shook her head.

 

'Dom keeps saying Frankie's name in her sleep and it's creeping me out'

 

'It would creep me out too' I laughed quietly so I wouldn't wake the others up.

 

'Yeah' She said sitting next to me and putting her head on my shoulder like she had on the bus. 'I'm worried about being head girl'

 

'What about it' I said stroking her hair. (Which was super soft and vanilla scented)

 

'The responsibility'

 

'Ah it wont be that bad'

 

'Hmm'

 

'It wont, promise'

 

'Okay I trust you'

 

'OK then Ally go jump off a cliff'

 

'OK I trust you on this one' she laughed

 

'So when's your date with the D.J from the party?'

 

'It's not a date I'm just meeting with him and his parents and having dinner'

 

'That's what they all say'

 

'No I'm telling the truth.'

 

'Why else would you be going to dinner with some random guy and his parents?'

 

'Just because.'

 

'Because what Ally?' I snapped.

 

'I can't tell you.'

 

'Why can't you Ally?'

 

'I just can't James.'

 

'Fine' I said shrugging her head off my shoulder and storming in to my room.

~*~ 
 

'James' Said Ally walking in to my room in the middle of the night. 'I can't tell you why I'm going out to dinner with him but I promise it's not a date!'

 

'OK' I yawned 'I believe you now go back to sleep' I said closing my eyes,

 

'I can't sleep do you want to come for a walk with me?' She asked.

 

'No just come and sleep with me if you can't sleep' I said pulling her in to my bed where she snuggled up and fell asleep almost instantly her hair going rainbow as she dreamed.

 

~*~
 

When I woke up Ally was gone so I went and had a shower and then headed down to the lake where I saw Ally floating about on a lilo wearing an electric blue bikini.

 

'Hey Ally!' I shouted to her making her sit up suddenly and fall of the lilo.

 

'Hi' She said swimming over to me and climbing out of the lake, her hair was rainbow so I'm guessing she had been sleeping.

 

'How come you're out here already?' (it was still early....well it was 9 o'clock which is early for the Wotters.)

 

'Couldn't sleep, you?'

 

'I heard Frankie and Dom sneaking out a few minutes ago so I got up' I said laughing.

 

'Right' She said rolling her eyes.

 

'Do you wanna go for a broom ride?' I asked.

 

'Yeah let me just change' She said wondering back in to the cabin and coming back out a few minutes later wearing shorts and her "I heart Quidditch" top, holding both of our brooms.

 

'Mum owled and said one of the guests at the pub was an international broom maker so she bought one of his test brooms for me cheap, it's a Nimbus Spark' She grinned getting on to her old Comet.

 

'They're not meant to come out till next year though!' I exclaimed.

 

'As I said it's an old test model' She shrugged taking off, I followed closely behind her.

 

'It better be good I'm not having my star seeker flying on a piece of shit' I winked.

 

'”Star Seeker”, yeah I'll remember you call me that when you're making us practice in the rain again' She said rolling her eyes.

 

'Good' I smirked doing a few loop the loops.

 

'Did you bring your Quaffle with you?' She asked doing a wronski feint.

 

'Yeah' I answered accioing it.

 

'Chuck it here then and I'll chuck it back' She said opening her arms to receive it as I threw it to her.

 

'Hey!' Shouted Freddy from down on the ground. 'Playing Quidditch with out you me?' He said pretending to burst in to tears.

 

'Fine you can play!' Ally shouted.

 

'I wanna play too!' Shouted Dom jumping out of a bush with very messy hair.

 

'Ew' Said Ally 'My brother better not be down there too'

 

'It's a good thing I'm not then' Shouted Frankie's voice from inside the bush.

 

'Ew' Said Ally covering her eyes and Frankie clambered out of the bush looking as messy haired as Dom had.

 

'Your brother got busy with my cousin' I yelled to Ally.

 

'James you weren't meant to tell anyone about me and Frankie' Freddy said laughing and riding up to join us.

 

'Ew, ew, ew' Said Ally chucking it to Freddy who instinctively knocked it away (He along side Dom was a beater) in to the lake.

 

'Freddy that's my new Quaffle!' I shouted.

 

'Sorry mate I'll get it' He said flying very close to the lake and scooping it out from where it had been floating throwing it back to me.

 

'It's wet' I said trying to keep a gasp on it.

 

'Well it's been in the water' Freddy said in a mocking tone.

 

'Duh James' Dom said flying over leaving only Aves who had just woken up and Frankie on the ground.

 

'Lets play two aside then' Ally said.

 

'Fine you and James versus me and Dom' Freddy said.

 

'No fair you two are used to working together as a team!' Ally pointed out.

 

'Exactly' Dom said winking.

 

'Fine' Huffed Ally 'You try and get the Quaffle down to that side and well get it to the other side' Ally said pointing to both ends of the lake.

 

'Right' I said before flying closer to Ally and whispering the plan in to her ear which she nodded to.

 

'Ok' Said Ally hovering the Quaffle in mid air between the teams.

 

'Three, two, one' She said realising it which Dom immediately grabbed flying down her end of the lake before trying to throw it to Freddy while I grabbed the Quaffle before he could get it, while I flew down the other end of the lake before pretending I'd dropped it when Ally swooped down and got it the rest of the way to our end of the lake.

 

'Woo' She shouted doing a victory lap around the lake.
We continued playing that way for the rest of the morning and then in the afternoon we played an adults Vs kids Quidditch match which WE won might I add!

And the rest of the week was mostly spent in the lake with Frankie and Dom sneaking out most nights.

Then it came to Friday and it was time for the long journey home which we had decided we would wear our onesies for!

On the way home Ally fell asleep AGAIN (Which is lucky she did because Frankie and Dom where fondling each other for the ENTIRE journey).


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