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'Your Beautiful' by Wizzo123
Chapter 1 : Your Beautiful
 
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Your Beautiful by James Blunt, modified to suit the story












Fabulous Chapter Image by Jetaway @ TDA



Severus P.O.V

My life is brilliant
My life is brilliant.


I was doing well at school, I had friends and Potter and his toerag friends had left me alone. It was a late friday after our potions exam.
Walking down the narrow corridors I saw many familiar sights, boys and girls holding masses of books, people laughing and joking around, people generally joking aroung and that was when I saw it an angel, she smiled at me, her eyes glittering as she turned around

My love is pure.
I saw an angel.
Of that I'm sure.
She smiled at me in the corridors.


She was holding hands with a familiar messy black haired man, laughing at his joke, her eyes sparkling while he whispered stuff in her ear and kissed her on the cheek. Pain stabbs me all through my body and my heart humps and my heart feels like it is being stabbed over and over.

She was with another man.
But I won't lose no sleep on that,
'Cause I've got a plan.


Tears automatically were brought to my eyes as my hair fell in front of my face, 'this can't be happening to me, I'm the one who has loved her since we were nine years of age and tha brat (Potter) messes it up' I have to stop this!

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause Ill never be with you.

Slamming my books down under the shade of a beech tree I watched the day to day activities the other students did, until one familiar couple came and sat on the jetty holding hands with there feet in the water, she turned back at me and smiled again, where has that friendship gone?  I got up and started walking she turned round and our gaze was held for a few seconds

Yes, she caught my eye,
As I walked on by.
She could see from my face that I was,
Flying high.

Graduation came quickly that year, I kept seeing James and Lily plant small but loving kisses on each others mouths and I gradually become used to that stabbing pain in my heart. 'Sev, Sev!' Someone called I turned around to see Lily walking towards me in her dress robes- Golden floorlenght gown that made her look like a true princess- ' Severus, I need to talk to you' Lily said looking me in the eye, 'I just wanted to say goodbye, forever' she kissed me on the cheek and then left to where James was standing watching.

And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last till the end.

The worst news was later to come that evening, James Charlus Andrew Potter proposing to MY Lily Flower and worst of all she said yes. She looked so beautiful, her eyes were glittering and her face glowing with happiness, she pulled him into a tight embrace, she looked at me again, our eyes held the contact and it was over.

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful it's true
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause Ill never be with you.


When I heard the news, that Lily was pregnant, my heart collapsed, It broke into a million pieces. She was definatly going to be with this man forever and always, and there was nothing i could do about it. I dwelled for many days and cryed my heart out, it all made sense to join the dark lord at this point, to get that well that Mudblood out of my head! That Beautiful Fantastic... Mudblood, No Muggle Born

You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
There must be an angel, with a smile on her face,
When she thought that I should be with you
.

When the news came to me that she had died, I cried for over a week. Her son lived and I, Severus Tobias Snape am going to do every thing in my power to keep him alive. And when that day comes where Voldemort trys to kill him, I Severus Snape will jump in front of that curse as that boy, Harry James Potter is my only connection to my Beloved Lily Evans with them entrancing Green eyes like Lilys will be saved, I will make sure of it!

But it's time to face the truth,
I will never be with you.












This is my first song fiction so it might be a bit rough around the edges.



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