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A Final Breath by portia
Chapter 1 : A Final Breath
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A Final Breath


A character we all know takes his life in hoping he will have avenged all others, been in a last moment reflection notices all he is doing is letting down the one life he cared for… POV of Character dying.

Authors Notes:
I made this story PG-13 because the fact suicide is in it. There is no cussing or vulgarity in sexual contents, it’s just, little kiddies should not be reading about Suicide, but should be recognized as a very large problem in our world today. I pray for all lost souls that have taken their own lives. Hopefully, they have found their calling on the other side. God Bless. ^_^ The song is My Last Breath(#10 on their CD Fallen).


Hold on to me love
you know I can't stay long
all I wanted to say was I love you and I’m not afraid
can you hear me?
Can you feel me in your arms?

I’ve failed life- not just mine but everyone else’s. I’ve let them all down and here I lay, ready to drink to death, alive while they turn in their graves watching me ready to take the broken soul to the underworld.

Holding my last breath
safe inside myself
are all my thoughts of you
sweet raptured light it ends here tonight

Whispers come from the breeze racing towards my ears. They want me to live…but I don’t listen to the righteous. How do you think deviled voices I’ve ended up a coward, alive and in hiding from the outside world so they don’t see the shame that has broken my face- the usual sneer. I miss life, but it is death I yearn for…it is death I want.

I’ll miss the winter
a world of fragile things
look for me in the white forest
hiding in a hollow tree (come find me)
I know you hear me
I can taste it in your tears

The world wasn’t ready for the unforgettable war. Potter, precious Potter, brought down the Dark Lord, but in a ‘precious’ sacrifice for the few living in the place between life and death, he died, letting the souls taken by the Dark Lord shower onto him, sucking him dry of life and of power…a power to rule all. He was to become our next Dark Lord…

Holding my last breath
safe inside myself
are all my thoughts of you
sweet raptured light it ends here tonight

I drink to death…down my throat the poison goes. If anything of a wish, I hope it reaches my broken heart before my lungs, so I can feel the pain leave me and then my last breath leave my vulgar lips, thin and sour. Just like my life, gone sour, thinning by the moment…flashing before my eyes I see it leaving…the memoirs of school days. The dirty work I did for the Dark Lord. The good I did for Dumbeldore, the man who was my Father, I let down… I miss those days in his office. Explanation after Explanation… I miss it all…I’m missing life…

closing your eyes to disappear
you pray your dreams will leave you here
but still you wake and know the truth
no one's there

I’m leaving Earth now…Hell awaits me along with all the Death Eaters I faced and lied to. How they will tear me apart down there. Can you die a second death in Hell? Where is the next Hell? I will surly die a second death… Maybe tonight…maybe tomorrow. There was one girl I loved most… she will never know though…for she lies a floor above me now, as I fade to the darkness that Death has brought me to. The being itself is here for me, to take me to my final resting place…


I took my last breath…no more life to live, but a death to die… I’ve died for you love…I’ve died for you as your son has died for me…I’ve let you down…

say goodnight
don't be afraid
calling me calling me as you fade to black

© 2003 Wind-Up
Song by Evanescence: AMY LEE/ BEN MOODY

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