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First Impressions... by Lily Opal Evans
Chapter 1 : Dilemma
 
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A/N: I am soo sorry if the characters are out of character or if i got the words wrong or made Hermione or Fleur completly horrible. plz dont kill me! this is my first song fic so i apologise if i did it wrong. Songs are in italics.Oh and i know that this scene doesn't go like this in the book; this is just my version of when Fleur and Hermione saw each other for the first time. Oh and the maneater parts are refering to fleur through Hermione's P.O.V

Disclaimer: Don't own the charcters (JKR does) dont own the song Maneater or Perfect (Nelly Furtardo/Princess Superstar/Mason)

                         ~~~Hermione’s P.O.V.~~~

I sighed and miserably pushed my food around the china plate. It made that horrid screeching sound that I can’t stand but I didn’t care. I didn’t care because someone not naming names (*cough*Ronald Weasley *cough*) was acting like a complete imbecile.

He (and every other boy in Hogwarts) was completely ignoring me (and all the other girls) to drool at that blonde `thing` that had appeared less than an hour ago.

For over 2 years I have been trying to get Ron to notice me as `more than a friend` and in less than an hour SHE comes in and has every boy in the area falling at her feet.

                            ~~~Fleur’s P.O.V ~~~

1234 1234 Let me hear ya scream if ya want some more
Like aah push it push it; watch me work it
I’m perfect…


It is soo good to be moi! I have all ze boys looking at me as if I’m a goddess but I can’t blame zem! I must remember to look out for ze girls though; zey don’t look to pleased with me… especially zat bushy haired brunette who is definitely giving me less zan pleasant looks.

                     ~~~Hermione’s P.O.V ~~~

 She's a Man eater make you work hard make you spend hard
Make you want more…
She’s a man-eater makes your back pause, make your breath pause make you fall in In love…


This is so unfair; I should be the one Ron’s beautiful eyes are staring at, scared to break or make contact with. I would give anything to be in that position. This is really unfair; I hope it’s just a bad dream!

“OW” Ok, maybe I pinched myself a bit too hard. 

“What’s wrong ‘Mione?” 

Wow; something actually managed to disturb his obsessive staring. Oh, no; scratch that last comment. Ron had only returned to reality because Fleur had gone to the bathroom. I guess I’m not that important then….

                          ~~~Fleur’s P.O.V ~~~

After I returned from zee bathroom I felt everyone staring at me again. I’m not stupid, I could feel zat zee tension was, well, tense. So I decided to lighten zee mood:
“Is zere sumting in my teeth?” For zome unknown reason; zee bushy haired girl was laughing extremely hard at this. Her eyes were narrowed and zee smile she was wearing was thin and tightlipped.

I ran my hand over my silk Beauxbaton cloak to get rid of zee creases and all zee boys jaws’ dropped. Oh dear. I am doubting that I could become friends with someone who is giving me, uhh, zee evils… 

  Oh Well...

The look, the lips, the hips, the hair, the eyes, the skin, the waist
Look what I can do with this microphone so guess what I’m gonna do with you at home…


                           ~~~Hermione’s P.O.V~~~

All eyes were on `her` again. She looked nervous but I bet inside she was saying:
Everybody look at me, me
I walk in the door you start scream-ing
(ok, I know this part’s at the beginning of the song but it fits in here)

Ok, I admit it, I’m jealous. Everyone sees me as `the-bookworm-who-hangs-around-with-Harry Potter-and-crushing-on-Ron Weasley-who-is-too-blind-to-see-it! ` I doubt that she cares less than a rat’s ass about him and he’s going to end up getting hurt.

Great; just perfect! I have been polite and calm ever since I came here (except slapping Malfoy last year but that was different) and then she shows up and now I’m using phrases such as `rats’ ass`. If this carries on then I’m going to hex her so bad; ALL her nails will break!

And when she walks she walks with passion
And when she talks she talks like she can handle it…


                               ~~~Fleur’s P.O.V ~~~

I felt all ze boys sigh and ze girls gasp as I removed my muffler and my long silvery blonde hair cascaded past my waist. It was too cold in here! Have zey not heard of a thing called heat? And where exactly is all ze proper food? I scanned the room until I found something decent to eat. Ahh bouillabaisse.

“Excuse me, are you wanting ze bouillabaisse?” Until this moment I hadn’t noticed who was sitting next to the bouillabaisse- the bushy haired, glaring, obviously in love girl who has probably been planning the best ways to kill me since the moment I arrived.

I wondered which of the boys next to her she fancied. It could be the bespectacled boy with the dark hair and lightning scar- ‘Arry Potter I think he was- or the more obvious candidate, the gaping red head whom was receiving death looks from the girl. Oh well, that would explain the `evils`.


The look, the lips, the hips, the hair, the eyes, the skin, the waist
Look what I can do with this microphone so guess what I’m gonna do with you at home…
The look, the lips, the hips, the hair, the eyes, the skin, the waist
You see I can do with this microphone so guess what I’m gonna do with you at home…


Perfection, ha-ha

                            ~~~Hermione’s P.O.V ~~~

Her tinkling laugh was echoing around my mind driving me insane. It was absolute torture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When she came over to get the bouillabaisse (which is delicious by the way) Ron’s jaw (if possible) dropped even further. I was getting more annoyed by the second, I wish I could warn him but he would just laugh.

Man eater make you work hard make you spend hard
Make you want more…
She’s a man-eater makes your back pause, make your breath pause make you fall in
In love…

Man eater make you work hard make you spend hard
Make you want more…
She’s a man-eater makes your back pause, make your breath pause make you wish you’d never ever met her at all

You wish you’d never ever met her at all…
Wish you’d never ever met her at all…
You wish you’d never ever met her at all…


   I watched her walk back to the Ravenclaw table and laughed. If that was how she reacted to the weather (by bringing a muffler- it’s not even cold for goodness sake) and the food (by turning your nose up at everything even remotely English); then I couldn’t wait to see her next few months here. It would also mean that every time Ron so much as looks at her, I get to kick him- which isn’t necessarily a bad thing. 


A/N So ... did you get it? Hermione was jealous of Fleur and thought Fleur was a ma-eater. Fleur thought of herself as perfect. Sorry about the rubbbish accent. Reviews would be appreciated seeing as this is my first song fic. Thanks for reading!
 Lily Opal Evans




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