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His Charm by cutie17
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Chapter 1

I woke up suddenly from my dream that had just ended and sleepily glanced at my clock, 7:01. I slumped back into my bed but suddenly sprung back up and jumped off my bed. I totally forgot that I had to go to King’s Cross! I grinned as I climbed into the shower. This was going to be my last year at Hogwarts, and I was Head Girl. Being Head Girl was always my dream, I could set an example for all other students.

I climbed out of the shower and got dressed. I hopped downstairs to my kitchen where my parents and my sister were. Nobody looked up or even said hi. I didn’t care; I was always invisible to my family, though Petunia only throws nasty insults to me every once in an hour. I ate some breakfast, deciding that I would also get some sweets on the train ride.

I ran back up the stairs and into my room. I thought about how I could get my trunk out, but then I remembered that I’m 17 and I can do magic outside of school. I did a spell that made my trunk feathery light, and I made it shrink and I threw it inside my pocket.

I skipped over to my neighbor, who was also my best friend and goes to Hogwarts too. I could see her already, walking in front of her father who was bringing down her trunk.

“You know that you could shrink that and make it feathery light? Come on Allison, you are 17!” Allison’s parents are muggle, like mine and don’t know magic.

“WHAT?” Allison’s dad yelled, angry that he had to carry a HUGE and HEAVY trunk down the stairs when there was a simple solution.

“Lily!” Allison looked at me as if to say ‘why do you have to be so smart?’ I looked at her as though to say ‘sorry’.

Eventually we arrived at King’s Cross, and Allison and I sped down the other platforms, gave Allison’s parents a short wave to say bye and hurried through the barrier onto Platform 9 ¾.

I dropped my stuff in the Head’s Compartment and joined Allison in hunting for our two other best friends. We soon found them and got into a huge group hug. My group of friends includes Allison, Kate and Maria. Allison has brown hair and green-brown eyes. Kate has blonde hair and green-blue eyes. Maria has black hair and brown eyes.

We hugged until Sirius Black, James Potter, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew entered. “Hey! I want a group hug too!” Black cried encircling his arms around Allison, Kate, Maria and me. James and Remus did the same. I could see Black and Kate kissing like crazy, they have been dating since last year. Allison and Remus also got into a passionate kiss as they had been going out for two years. Maria and I stood by each other waiting for the couples to get out of their kisses.

“Hey Evans, don’t I get a kiss?” Potter asked, now in front of me.

“No.” I answered flatly.

“Will you go out with me this year?”

“No Potter!”

Time soon passed on and I found myself sitting at the Gryfindor Table waiting for Dumbledore to begin his speech.

Dumbledore stood up after a couple of minutes, “Let the sorting begin.” He said as Professor McGonagall came in with the little First Years tagging along behind her. After the sorting Dumbledore stood up again to say two words, “Dig in.”

The food appeared on the tables and I immediately threw some food on my plate as fast as I could, I knew that Potter and Black would take it all.

Dumbledore stood up once again to make yearly announcements. “First off, hello and welcome to another year at Hogwarts! You should all know that the Forbidden Forest is forbidden, and some of our older students know that too.” He said, his eyes wandering to the direction of the Marauders, who sniggered under their breath. “Also, we have our new Head’s both from Gryfindor, James Potter and Lily Evans!”

I stood up, in slight shock that Potter made Head Boy, Potter stood up too, taking little bows. We sat back down. Dumbledore made some more announcements and he let us up to our dorms.

“Ally! Wait up!” I called. I caught up with Allison and started a little conversation with her. The four of us walked up the Girl’s Dormitory and I saw a door on my right that read ‘Head Girl Lily Evans’ I opened up the door, friends behind me and saw a canopy bed, a desk, dresser and a huge windowsill that I could sit on and look out on the grounds of Hogwarts. There was a door leading to a magnificent bathroom.’

Allison, Kate and Maria set up to the 7th year girl’s dormitory room. I spotted my trunk and started to unpack.

After finally unpacking all my items, I slipped into a comfy tank top and pajama bottoms. I left my room and walked over to where Allison, Kate and Maria’s room was.

I jumped on Kate’s bed where everyone else was seated. We talked about our summers and … well girly things I guess you could say.

At 10:00 I went back to my room and went to bed. My last thought was I can tell this is going to be a great year already. How wrong I was back then …

A/N: how do ya like it? well this is my first fanfic and I hope that I get some faithful readers!!!!!!!!!! PLZ review if u r even taking the time to read!!!!!!!!!!

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