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Fluorescent Adolescent by greenbirds

Rating: MatureStory Reviews: 616
Chapters: 25
Words: 164992
Characters: Albus, Fred II, James (II), Louis, Rose, Scorpius, OC
Genre(s): Humor, Romance, Young Adult
Era: Next Generation
Pairings: James/OC
Status: Work In Progress
First Published: 2013.11.12
Last Published Chapter: 2017.08.28
Last Updated: 2017.08.28
Favorite Story Of: 307 users
Advisory: Contains profanity, Mild violence, Scenes of a sexual nature, Substance abuse, Sensitive topic/issue/theme

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The HPFF Dobby Awards: Winner - Most Addicting (2017)

The HPFF Dobby Awards: Winner - Best Romance (2017)

(c) awkward. @ tda | new chapter!

For two as different (and yet united in their faults) as James Potter, Gryffindor Quidditch captain, arrogance extraordinaire; and Effy Wilderson, Ravenclaw seeker of sharp-tongued, often unnecessary wit; they did seem to spend a lot of time together.

A story of high flying, low whispers, lack of common sense and an intoxicatingly raw, fluorescent teenage magnetism

Dobby Winner 2017: Best Romance & Most Addicting Fic

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews Read
1 crushed moon extract

Maybe our best versions of ourselves come out at six in the morning, and we've never noticed because we're all busy sleeping.

3268 42
2 communism in mermish

I just want to dance with Mikey through the halls, beating on my tambourine and cartwheeling and flying for Albus Potter thinks I'm fit.

3702 20
3 more than nice

“Do you want to come with me to this Halloween thing next week, Effy?” He said this with a grin but then looked down at the ground, and his cheeks turned a bit red. 

4030 21
4 saturdays

“Oh, Elizabeth,” said James, smirking, “this isn’t a game. This is just dancing.” 

4966 23
5 dark rooms, bright lights

“What?!” I cried. “I was in the kitchens? And I can’t remember?!”

4793 18
6 little sisters

"Thank God you were caught," said Aspen, shuddering. "Madame Pomfrey said that if James hadn't caught you, you could have died you were so high up-"

5074 20
7 unbroken and wild

She grinned at me, heisting the black sports bag further up her shoulder. "Do you fancy spending a Sunday afternoon in the Gryffindor common room?"

4905 37
8 it's cold outside

And we looked at each other. I stroked his cheekbone, feeling the roughness of the underlying stubble, and he stroked my hair, his fingers grazing my left temple.

8076 23
9 tattered velvet carpeting

"Fine," I said, and he smirked. "Perhaps I fancy you a little."

4297 22
10 some aloe vera?

I burst out laughing, and I couldn't stop, not when he demanded it, not when he pleaded, but only when his lips came crashing down onto mine, and we stood there, in the middle of the street, under the falling snow, kissing like it was the first time.

7612 34
11 wild horses

"Right then," said Mikey. "So you'll pretend to be Scorpius's mum?"

5766 18
12 wild horses, part.2

"I'm teaching her how to party like a Gryffindor," she explained loudly.

7698 32
13 labradors, hedgehogs

The night went on, and Mikey and Jasmine slowly sobered up, therefore the conversation got generally deeper, as we asked for more and more refills of ice-cream.

8359 27
14 albus! albus! albus!

"Hey," said Al, his hands thrust in his pockets and his head tilted upwards, a sign of confidence, borderline arrogance. He had never looked more like James.

5645 18
15 the usual atticus

 "Are we going to have an argument over this?" he asked.

7141 21
16 unicorn blood

“Your bikini,” she repeated. “Oh come on, Eff. It’s like, thirty degrees- we’re going down to the lake.”

6076 25
17 the owlery

"Wilderson," said a throaty voice. It sounded relieved and almost apologetic.

7029 28
18 staring into space

"No, Wilderson," he said, his tone gentler, his cool fingers grazing my arm, and then grasping slightly tighter when I didn't sit back down. "Stay. You should stay."

9148 26
19 literally, jewish god bless

 "Effy!" cried Lara, as I picked up my broom and walked away. "You can't just leave Quidditch practise!"

5324 19
20 whiny male protagonist

"If only Aspen was here," Oscar said, wistfully. "We really need her input to make a complete group decision about what we're going to do next."

7382 21
21 eng-ger-land!

 "You can't blame me," I screamed into the loud, relentless rain, "for trying to get over you, James!"

9515 23
22 of stars & constellations

But like Albus I was drunk, drunk, wildly excited from the summer heat of the night and intensely exhilarated from the throbbing music, the loud noise around, the darkness of the party and the sensational freedom of being young and free and fluorescent in my adolescence.

7850 22
23 dancing eyes

"Yeah, because you're you," he said fairly. "I don't think I would like you if you didn't do stuff like that."

6092 19
24 crisp white shirt

 But here I am, after kissing Mikey, writing to you.

12726 30
25 something new

"God," said Heath, looking at Rose in both astonishment and admiration. "Scor, mate, your Gryffindor girlfriend is more Slytherin than you'll ever be."

8518 27

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