i think its cool, but you should add onto it and make it a more progressive thing you know? well, thats what I think enyway.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hmmmm good idea maybe I should write more to it.

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I love it! So cute!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :-D I love the fact that people appreciate my stories.

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Uh...how do you win a snowball fight? This is the tritest story I have ever read. Harry takes Hermione into a room that isn't really a room but is beautiful like Hermione...I don't get it. Even George Lucas writes better love scenes...well, maybe not.

Author's Response: lol thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Yes I know it's not the best romance fic ever for all I know it could be the worst. But anways, it's my first fanfic and I wrote it in like 30 minutes, didn't spend much time on it. Thanks for the review

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Good, short, and kind of predictible. Not a bad review, it was still a good story.

Author's Response: thank you very much for the reveiw, i know it was kind of predictible, but it was my first story and it was something that just poped in my head, and i really appreciate it that you think it's a good story thank you :-)

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Great start! A bit short and your summary doesn't really say much about the story! Hope to see more stories from you in the future!

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! Yes i am sorry that it was short, but i didn't know what else to put in it. and i think i'll redo the summary, yeah i dont like it myself

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Great story

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review, i am so happy that people like my story :-D

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Cute! Kinda short and you could have seperated it into smaller paragraphs to make it easier to read. It aslo could have had more details and the story seemed rushed but it was cute all the same!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review!!!!!

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