{reviewid: 2692130, reviewer: 'jada.caron'}
| Review #1, by jada.caron | Part 2 |
1st May 2012:
keep writing it is just getting good
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{reviewid: 1720230, reviewer: 'fanny-kun'}
21st November 2007:
wow...
definately the BEST story ever!
lmfao
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{reviewid: 1413794, reviewer: 'harrypottergirl'}
| Review #3, by harrypottergirl | Part 2 |
11th May 2007:
this rockes
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{reviewid: 1355283, reviewer: 'chelsie_potter338'}
26th March 2007:
wow like the stoy ae you going to update soon
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{reviewid: 1080339, reviewer: '%27Mione'}
27th July 2006:
This was you're first fiction? Woah, it was really good. I really liked the plot, at times it went a little too fast, but then i understood what you were writing.
Overall, excellent!
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{reviewid: 1079620, reviewer: 'drakio'}
27th July 2006:
This is a wicked and romantic story. But wat i don t understand is that why did draco had to kill hermine when he love her. I m going to read the other chapter now .
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{reviewid: 1071769, reviewer: 'danybetohp'}
| Review #7, by danybetohp | Part 2 |
21st July 2006:
Love it! Please make the third part
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{reviewid: 1011494, reviewer: 'Gryffindors_Heir'}
| Review #8, by Gryffindors_Heir | Part 2 |
4th June 2006:
Really good plot and storyline, but if i may make some recomendations? I'm not trying to be mean or rude, just giving you an opinion on how to improve it. Don't have it go so quickly, add more details. And also, have the characters tell the story, let them tell what's happening through thoughts or conversations, the latter being the better and easier way of going about it. Again, great story,and please don't take offense to my recomendations, they in no way need to be heeded. If you need a beta, i'd love to help!
Author's Response: A beta? *Squeals* Of course! And don't worry, I'm not as bad - that was when I was ten. Will contact you about the beta stuff.
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{reviewid: 1009232, reviewer: 'oreogirl25'}
| Review #9, by oreogirl25 | Part 2 |
3rd June 2006:
more more more so sweet harry and hermione hehe
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{reviewid: 1009103, reviewer: 'Lady%20Lilyfrost'}
| Review #10, by Lady Lilyfrost | Part 2 |
3rd June 2006:
That one i thought i needed kleenix lol!! love it. hope part 3 is a success!!=)
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{reviewid: 1004135, reviewer: 'magic_powers77'}
29th May 2006:
hi it sounds a bit like the movie Moulin Rogue, harry whispered "dead" like at the start of the movie and the doctor saying that the girl was going to die? just me? well i think it does! its a good story though
Author's Response: Never seen that movie! Will make a point of seeing it thought ;).
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{reviewid: 995883, reviewer: 'mMMM'}
22nd May 2006:
WOW YOU REALLY SUCK THIS GETS A ZERO RATING.
Author's Response: I'd appreciate if you wouldn't flame. Glad to know you don't have another outlet for your pent up anger.
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{reviewid: 990998, reviewer: 'fred%26georgeGF'}
| Review #13, by fred&georgeGF | Part 2 |
18th May 2006:
It was ok but it was kinda corny.No offence but it could have been better. It was great for your first time though.
Author's Response: I know *Blushes* Let's just say I was ten when I wrote this. Don't worry, I only posted it because I always post my stories.
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{reviewid: 985981, reviewer: 'Danielle'}
| Review #14, by Danielle | Part 2 |
13th May 2006:
Hahaa awwww!!! so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks sooo much! If you're the Danielle I know, that's good... and thanks!
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{reviewid: 985954, reviewer: 'Danielle'}
13th May 2006:
ahhh!! Nooo hermione cannot die!! lmao at least it's not Ron putting his head in her boobs. Ron is Mineeeeee ^.^
Author's Response: Lol Danielle. It was you. Will she die or not? Am I really that mean?
Ron = Jerk sometimes. Even though I know hate Harmony.
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{reviewid: 812822, reviewer: 'timehp123'}
15th December 2005:
are you going to write more? that was great!
Author's Response: That's the end actually, and I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 812818, reviewer: 'timehp123'}
15th December 2005:
are you going to write more? that was great!
Author's Response: Actually, that's the end.
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{reviewid: 674536, reviewer: 'Moony01'}
30th August 2005:
Er...this is Draco/Hermione? More Harry/Hermione.
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{reviewid: 673211, reviewer: '%2AIsabel'}
29th August 2005:
I really liked it! Keep writing.!!
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{reviewid: 668860, reviewer: 'Alex'}
27th August 2005:
I really don't like Draco right now. But what was the feeling Draco had when he saw them together? Anger? Jelously? Hate? I dunno but update soon! ;)
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{reviewid: 549321, reviewer: 'someone'}
16th June 2005:
why is this story under a draco/hermione fic
Author's Response: Sorry bout that. Waste of a review, though.
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{reviewid: 449562, reviewer: 'mikki'}
7th April 2005:
may i ask a question?
why does the malfoys is not sent to askaban? oh well... But i like your story continue please
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{reviewid: 448385, reviewer: 'Redemption'}
6th April 2005:
Uhhh... horrible, so far? Sorry if that sounds a bit harsh but what the hell?! That was... idiotically fast, hardly any detail. They fell in 'love' too fast. There's only been two chapters. And it's in a D/Hr romance section... horrible, in my opinion. A waste of words, it is,
Author's Response: I'm sorry that u dont like it, neither do i...it was my first fan fic ever, so...anyways...its ok if you dont like it!
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{reviewid: 447488, reviewer: 'jn'}
5th April 2005:
hey this story is good plz update soon thnx
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{reviewid: 446216, reviewer: 'jn'}
4th April 2005:
what did draco do? and why? and i kinda dont know wats going on here but its interesting so im waiting for more plz update soon thnx
Author's Response: Sorry, im done the story :(
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